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    150 favorites...Are you guys insane or something?

    So... Here I come, posting the first 3 rewritten chapters of My Little Okama...And before I know it, I'm the 8th featured story, get about 400 views in half an hour and a dozen new favorites...
    Seriously, are you guys monitoring me or something?

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150 favorites...Are you guys insane or something? · 9:32pm Nov 1st, 2012

So... Here I come, posting the first 3 rewritten chapters of My Little Okama...And before I know it, I'm the 8th featured story, get about 400 views in half an hour and a dozen new favorites...
Seriously, are you guys monitoring me or something?

Moving on... I'm working right now on the next rewritten chapter. Hopefully, I should be able to put everything that had been made previously in only 2 more chapters. And then, on to new contents!

If I'm lucky, I should be able to pull it off before the end of my holidays, Sunday...But given my track records, I doubt you'll have a new chapter to help you wait for season 3!

See ya! ~RaptorJesus


PS: The Prologue wasn't rewritten, but a bit of Trivia was added. Also, you might want to read the rewritten chapters, as a few things changed (for one, Bon Clay speaks Japanese...Which actually makes a damn lot of sense.)

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Good to see the story is still alive. like the rewrite, though which language Bon Clay speaks.... I don't care much for whether he speaks English or Japanese, as there is both a dubbed and original (which I follow) versions of the show.
But having him speak Japanese may make it easier for you to cram in some comedy points and shenanigans in there.
Looking forward to the next chapter.

Thule out!

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Basically, he'll get a translation spell to allow him to speak English. It will allow me to use English version of songs instead of the originals (because writing the Japanese lyrics is a bit of a pain) and have a few shenanigans with the words the spell doesn't translate^^
I doubt I'll be able to have him speak Japanese for the whole story...Especially a guy like him who speaks by way of long, epic speeches xD

467609 I just have one personal favor to ask from you. Please don't use the MiB neuralizer now that you rewrite the story. It's just too cheesy.
I don't think it fits in the story, only Pinkie could be the one to use it as an exception (Pinkie is more of a physics breaker than a 4th wall breaker), if you ask me...
If you want to keep the Dr. Who cameo, keep it as a alternative parallel universe Dr. who, and not the doctor coming from the human --> equestrian universe.

467812 The Doctor Who reference is a decoy...You'll see soon enough... I hope.
Also, no neuralizer joke? Well, I guess using it twice was just too much. But, honestly, I think it fits perfectly the whole "Celestia just teleported inside my fridge and blew it up" scenario :p
Maybe I'll keep this for an Okamake...They're supposed to be silly, after all. Or I'll try to find another memory-erasing reference...Or just go with a plain memory-erasing spell. Although I could still have Celestia put sunglasses on....

...You know what? I'll think about it. Right now I'm too tired to see just how cheesy it is. xD

467832 If plan A don't fit, go to plan M(agic)! Just say it's an old banned spell from Starswirl (explains why only Celestia and Luna know it).
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And the sunglasses... just deal with it!

HELLO RAPTORJESUS!!!!! IM NOT DEAD!!!!... yet. Also... IM NOT INSANE!!! I'm UNsane... there's a difference.

468273 I'm sane. Very sane. I'm so sane right now, you have no idea. You would be running around screaming if you knew just how SANE I am.

467861 But...I was already at plan S(tupid shit)!

468765 ...Deal with it!

469059 I went with plan H(istory's Strongest Disciple).I'm a strange man.

469363 Just how does THAT work?

469374 You'll see soon enough...Mwahaha...

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