Rewrite Stage Three, On Route · 5:22pm Sep 26th, 2018
Hey everypony!
I'm still working on rewriting First Equestrian Armored.
Between yesterday and today, I've rewritten a full four chapters. I've rediscovered just how fun it is to write the Bolo of Kindness- and with my newer styles/skills/etcs, she seems a lot less OOC... yet still shows the effects of the Bolo transformation on her thought processes. What's more, this time, Chap. 7 doesn't involve a fight!
In case you're wondering, it's chapters 4 through 7 I've rewritten and updated today. Yes, I know, I only publish one new chapter a day on any given story- but these aren't new chapters, they're rewritten old ones... nevermind that all the material in them is new. So no limit on them! Only one more chapter to go- number eight- before I can declare the rewrite complete and start continuing the story as per normal. I'm looking forwards to that!
That sounds like you are rules-lawyering...
I approve.