TA Hiss in the Dark
MLP: FiM
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One man is trapped in a game where the rules are unknown, allies are fuzzy at best, and nothing is as it seems. What else do you expect when the Gods play games with the lives of mortals?
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Sep

24th

2018

Next chapter just about done! · 12:49pm Sep 24th, 2018

Well, I've almost finished the next chapter for A Hiss in the Dark. Not really sure how I feel about this one. It's a connecting piece, but it just feels off somehow. I'm kinda at the point where I just want to get this part over with and onto what's next, simply because this one has been such a beast to write.

It has a couple of important plot points in it, though, and if you guys would like to take a look at it before I publish it, maybe tell me what I'm doing wrong with it, please do. As for now, though, I'd really like to finally get started on the next part, as well as work on the next chapter of What I Am.

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