my story is now up pending aproval

yep decided to upload it, maby comments can help push out the next chapter :/

this is the form its been in for monthes, finaly decided that it ended quite nice, so rather then cloging it up with an alternate point of view i decided next chapter will do that.

please tell me your thoughts.

ironicaly last night i also published my first portal 2 test chamber which you can view here http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=105533207

its called

Rose Test Chamber 1 version 1.2