Went Over Chapter 5 Of Intriguing · 9:16am Sep 6th, 2018
Looking over it, I felt the part where Photo Finish doesn't believe Fancy Pant's letter was a bit anti-climactic.
I've learned that, when taking apart a lie, characters need to accentuate what they know is true through more than just certainty. Facts need to be measured.
So I took reference from Reservoir Dogs.
Anyone want to check it out, let me know if it works. Thanks.
Will do!