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Firesight


I'm an IT Brony who writes stories based on a show for 8-year old girls whose content is meant for anything but 8-year old girls.

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  • 1 week
    Prereader verdict on new Midnight Rising chapter is in...

    And unfortunately, that verdict is unanimous:

    Complaints were: too meta, hard to follow, does nothing to advance the plot, and potentially makes things worse while trying to fix them.

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  • 1 week
    Still waiting on Midnight Rising prereads...

    Which are particularly important this time, because the first preread I got back was negative. As it came from AJ_Aficionado, whose opinions I particularly value mostly because he’s more interested in the story than the sex, I tend to give what he said about it credence but still want to hear from everyone else before I start making changes to the new chapter.

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  • 2 weeks
    Mind changed on removing the griffon arc from Midnight Rising + teaser

    After receiving pleas from multiple readers to keep the Enter the Griffon chapters in place, I have decided to do so and go with my original plan, which was to simply offer new readers the chance

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  • 2 weeks
    One final thing...

    I have been advised by no less an authority than CHS acting Vice-Principal Ms. Cheerilee to use the upcoming Midnight Rising chapter as strictly a recap to relaunch the story, and not get into Lemon Zest until the following chapter, when I can devote a full entry to it without any split in focus. No, really. She did. You’ll see what I mean when the chapter launches, but basically, I’m

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  • 3 weeks
    I have reached a decision on Midnight Rising...

    Thanks in part to one final comment that came to me over PM last night. It wasn't a mean comment. In fact, it was nothing but a simple, politely asked question from a reader I hadn't heard from before: do you have to read the griffon chapters to understand what comes after?

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Aug
29th
2018

One final Firefly teaser... · 2:48pm Aug 29th, 2018

Well, folks... I promised a graphics teaser for the new Firefly chapter, so here it is:

You're looking at an overhead shot taken from Bing Maps of a ten-mile stretch of the Grand Canyon not far from the South Rim, for the record. If you've never been there, it's a place that truly does live up to its name. The Grand Canyon is how I envision the Delemare River gorge, and it consists of high cliffs and bluffs that leads down to a plateau, at the center of which sits a sharp and narrow ravine where the Colorado river itself cuts through. It's over 5,000 feet from the canyon edge to the river places, for the record, to let you know how incredibly big and deep it actually is. Here's a decent picture of the terrain the ponies and gryphon forces are confronting:

Note the lower plateau and winding inner gorge where the river sits. That's what Still Way is proposing they use to attack the gryphon assembly area, while Fell Flight doesn't like that idea at all, you may recall from a couple teasers back. What do they come up with? You'll find out Friday.

I will have the Epsilon battle maps done by then, but it's unlikely, unfortunately, that the Raptor ones will be. I'll probably have to put those in later. But the 10,500 word new chapter will be released on Friday morning. Enjoy!

Comments ( 5 )

So, is that two individual magus gryphons, or two centuries of them?

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Thanks!

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Two individuals. Two centuries would be represented by “I” (following standard NATO military map notation for a company) and be just about unstoppable by anything short of Celestia at this point. I do see a mistake on the map now--a battalion should be “II”, not “I”.

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In the battles we’ve seen, yes. In plenty of other places, they did just fine. That said, they are primary targets when they appear and the first day of battle is certainly revealing some weaknesses in them. We’ll address those as we go.

PS: I’ve uploaded about half a dozen new graphics to the google doc. Give them a glance if you like.

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