Reworking · 3:23am Aug 28th, 2018
Thank you to those who have been interested in my story about Eribia, I am loathe to say that I haven't had any inspiration for her in a while... it's actually something that has been in my mind for some time now and I wish to announce that I am planning a bit of a rewrite for the story, perhaps the whole thing... perhaps not... likely the whole thing since I want to start fresh without any extra problems to work with.
There are parts of the story where I feel I could write better and actually give a bit more thought to since I had simply been writing the story with more action in mind than the actual plan for the story which was supposed to actually have bits of slice of life in it.
To make it clear, Eribia is certainly meant to be very powerful... but I've gotten to a point in my writing through being a GM for various RPGs such as WH40k Dark Heresy, D&D 5th edition and even the game Ironclaw where I want to focus less on her power and more on her interaction with characters. While I do plan on mostly following similar arcs, I plan on doing some more adjustments to her personality and power.
Typically when I write, I try to think of it as using a tabletop RPG for a framework to balance character power, or at least have a credible reason as to why a character may be more or less powerful than another... but by the end of this blog, I've decided on just about a complete rewrite of all the chapters I've done so far with a bit more of a focus on the characters than much else.
Since there are portions of the story that I do like, I may likely keep those portions in as-is, but much of the story dealing with Eribia and The Displaced (Since crossovers are naturally to happen, it is part of the theme after all) will certainly be rewritten