• Member Since 18th Sep, 2013
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Aura Zero


Main Bio on profile. Favorite pony is Applejack, however, Fluttershy will always have my heart. Spike is best character to me. I'm a gamer, writer, and love to read. Photo by Joakaha from DeviantArt

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  • 294 weeks
    A Complete Overhaul!

    Hi skeletons, cobwebs, and other people that are still here! I know it has been a while, but I would like to tell you I have gained an interest in editing my first story..

    Though it's not just a few edits...but a HUGE amount of edits!

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    3 comments · 395 views
  • 385 weeks
    Oh, another mistake...

    Well, I thought about this for a while, and while there still will be comedy in this story, the sad part of the story in my opinion (and one other person, the only one who knows the whole story as well as me) plays more of an important part in the story. So, I had to change that tag. Once again I apologize for the change, but the story will remain the same for the most part so no rereading is

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    0 comments · 337 views
  • 388 weeks
    I figured some things out...

    I made a mistake...

    I never should have removed Lira from my story. That whole time I meant to remove Berry... :facehoof:

    Sorry about that guys but Lira will be coming back as a main character to my story. Coco will stay, but Berry will be the one switched. Sorry to all those in advance. But she still will make an appearance.:twilightsmile:

    3 comments · 334 views
  • 465 weeks
    A little edit to this story guys!

    Just as the title says, I made a edit of my story Taciturn Carrots. This is mostly a heads up for those that have read it. Also there might be a chapter posted on this one soon. I feel like making some...:twilightsmile:

    0 comments · 374 views
  • 490 weeks
    Mass Re-edit

    Hey my awesome Followers, and everypony else reading this! Aura here with an update on my First story Guardian!

    Have you ever retread one of your older stories and thought: "Did I really write this?" Unfortunately, that's what I feel about Guardian.

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    4 comments · 554 views
Aug
26th
2018

A Complete Overhaul! · 7:34pm Aug 26th, 2018

Hi skeletons, cobwebs, and other people that are still here! I know it has been a while, but I would like to tell you I have gained an interest in editing my first story..

Though it's not just a few edits...but a HUGE amount of edits!

Don't worry, the story will not change. I will guarantee you that. However, I realized that this story was my first, and most creative one. However it didn't get nearly as much credit as some of my others. What the heck guys? :raritydespair:

But it's OK! I realized it's because my writing had improved but I didn't fully improve my main story! Phew, and here I thought you guys might hate it. But that would never be true.:twilightsheepish:

So I will be putting it on a hiatus. I will touch up every chapter, add variety to the dialogue, adding more detail where needed, expressing more emotions, correcting errors, and even touching up on my character personalities. I want them to match their actual characters after all.

So, if I were to time these edits, I would say... Give me a month. 2 tops, depending on how much bad stuff I have to edit. But once it's done, I would like you all that read it before to give it another try.

I'm sure you won't regret it.

P/S: I know the show has developed much farther since I made this story, but it will still be in the same time frame. Sadly, princess Twilight wouldn't fit with the story premise. I hope you all will still give it a chance regardless!

Wish me luck!:moustache:

Comments ( 3 )

Always a fun process to polish a favorite work.

Good luck dude. Can’t wait to read your story again

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Im sure it will be much more enjoyable!:twilightsmile:
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it is. I'm excited to make it better. Little changes here and there made me realize that.

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