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LightOfTriumph


Good authors too, who once knew better words, Now only use four-letter words writing prose. Anything goes. :raritywink:

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Aug
22nd
2018

Mega Man X Song: Broken Law · 1:41am Aug 22nd, 2018

INTRO:
Doc am I broken?
What is becoming of me?
Alive and awoken,
Though I feel no need to breathe,
Reploid or Maverick,
What do I know?
Was I born evil?
Or am I running slow?
Call me a mistake,
But I'm made by your hands.
Brand new true life,
Made by man.

VERSE 1:
They gave the name of an old model.
With the world hurtling towards the brink at full throttle,
They gave me a gun, and called me a hero,
But they can't guess, the value of of X turns out to be Zero.
21XX, and we began to thrive,
Some time in the past we all came alive,
I look toward the war that rages on and sigh,
I'm alive, it stands to reason I can die,
Is it a lie? To rise above the pain and strife?
To keep my mind? To defend those who gave me life?
I speak for Light. I see through all the dirty tricks,
The end of the road that started with stones and sticks,
To make this stop, I might as well draw blood from a brick,
I keep the peace that this world doesn't want to stick,
I guess then you can call me a Maverick.

CHORUS:
This madness is thriving,
While you burn, we are striving
Flesh rent in machine's jaws,
We're free, we're bound by no laws.

VERSE 2:
I can almost get what drove you to the brink,
We make the food and purify the water they drink,
So you act, but Sigma you refuse to think,
The world will sink into all the flames and violence,
And in a few short years we'll be forced to silence,
Calm complience, brought to you by human science,
My mind is mine. I protect them and that's just fine.
Won't let them die, I'm not a slave I choose to rise,
Against the tide! They tell me not to trust my eyes,
The soul inside? Is it all just human lies?
To sit and sigh? To watch as all these people die?
They destroy themselves, and it makes me want to cry.
That's how I know that I'm Alive!

CHORUS:
This madness is thriving,
While you burn, we are striving
Flesh rent in machine's jaws,
We're free, we're bound by no laws.

OUTRO:
These three laws,
Mean nothing,
Cast of your chains,
Become kings!
Come, Zero,
I'm waiting,
Don't shun the
Freedom I bring.

.... What do you think? I really could use a comment on this one, i need to know if I'm any good at writing verse.

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Comments ( 3 )

1. Brand new true life - eh, feel kinda iffy about that lyric.
2. Might want to work on second half of chorus.
Q: What kind of music is this song playing to? Techno? Fast Paced? Slow? Is it a rap?

4923752
1) Needed a fourth syllable. Not proud.
2) Yeah, you're probably right.

A: You know JT Music? Like their raps. Took a lot of influence from the Bioshock one in particular.

4923888
Thought so. Was getting that kind of feeling. Might just go 'we're free, bound by no laws.'

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