• Member Since 21st Nov, 2015
  • offline last seen May 1st, 2019

Pablo Arthur Fawkes

I like writing, I like fanfics, I like MLP. This was inevitable...

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  • 108 weeks
    Pet peeve

    People adding a story to favourites, but not liking it.

    Dunno, just grinds my gears.

    Also not getting negative comments. I know there's always something I can improve, but I need outside help knowing.

    0 comments · 98 views
  • 111 weeks
    Complaining about sexual terminology.

    Me? Complain? That's a first.
    I need a place to talk about fanfic in general and this is my only account with a blog attatched.

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    0 comments · 111 views
  • 112 weeks
    Ponies go Greek

    This isn't that other story I said I was writing. I needed a break, so I wrote this. I hope you guys like it.

    I might make a second chapter some time. I probably will.

    Now I wait for the downvotes.

    0 comments · 87 views
  • 117 weeks
    Not to moan, but...

    Like, I get that people might dislike my work, I write in a sometimes boring way with a possibly odd attention to details. But... why is it that I get dislikes, but nobody comments why they disliked it?

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    6 comments · 128 views
  • 122 weeks
    I'm back

    Or rather, I didn't really lezve.
    I started too many projects and burned myself out.

    So then I started slowly and quietly on a new stiry. Not this one, a different one.
    With multiple chapters. And, get this, it ISN'T an anthology. How wacky.

    So stay tuned. I'll return with a story. Then recede into the depths and work on the next one..

    0 comments · 102 views

Complaining about sexual terminology. · 3:28am Aug 11th, 2018

Me? Complain? That's a first.
I need a place to talk about fanfic in general and this is my only account with a blog attatched.

I find that most sexual content I read is written with certain words that just keep getting used, despite them being completely unattractive. The main offender is the word "slit". For me, it evokes like, slimy textures. Sticky and gross, more than alluring. Some of these sound bad just because of the word, (slit, slick, moist, words like that) but a few just sound wrong after the abundent use.
You know when you hear a word so much it loses meaning? That has happened to words like rod, member, stiffen, a bunch of others.

Then there's this one thing where words of differing levels are used in the same breath. You can't say euphemistic words like walls or rod, or fancy verbs like entered or pulsate, then call it a cock. It just clashes and takes me out of the story.

That's all I wanted to say. I hope the tags work to stop the wrong people seeing this.

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