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Knight Breeze


Just your average gaming geek/college student. I study computer science, play pathfinder, and write stories, and have a patreon!

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  • 47 weeks
    Xlibris

    Hey, you guys ever hear of Xlibris? I've got an offer from them to publish my book, but I'm getting some shady vibes from some of the reviews I've read about them. Any thoughts?

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  • 48 weeks
    Amazon's changing it's print costs.

    So, as of June 20th, Amazon will be changing its print costs. Specifically, everything is going to be a bit more expensive. If you were on the fence for buying a physical copy of my books, now's the time to change your mind, seeing as how the price is going to increase in a couple of months. Thought I'd give you all the heads up.

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  • 50 weeks
    What I Am: Aftermath chapter.

    Hey, guys, I'm writing a conclusion chapter for What I Am. Nothing too substantial, given that a sequel and spin off already exist, but I thought I'd put it down as both a way to let those that don't exactly follow me (or, at the very least, don't follow my blog) know that the second book is out, and also know that A Darkened Sky is about to get a whole lot of chapters.

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  • 50 weeks
    Fool's Gambit.

    Man, did you ever go back and just... cringe at what you did before? That happened to me with Fool's Gambit. The story has plenty of potential, that's not the problem. My problem is with how it's written. The prose is off, there are numerous errors, and I feel like the whole thing is rushed. Like, that first part could have easily been 4-5 chapters longer, and it would have been better for

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  • 51 weeks
    Live on Google Play!

    Hey, guys, just wanted you to know that What I've Become and Nightmare of the Past is now live on Google Play! So, if you didn't have a kindle-compatible device before, you can buy both books for 3.99 each right now on Google Play! I'll be working to get them into more outlets during the next couple of days, so keep an eye out for them!

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Aug
8th
2018

Welp, back to work... · 2:30pm Aug 8th, 2018

So, I've finished the first book of the official version of What I've Become. It still needs some editing, as well as some prereading that isn't from the author, but it's done. This means my time and creativity have been freed up significantly, so I'll be getting back to work on the next chapters of What I Am and Hiss in the Dark. Expect to see at least one of those stories update by this time next week, because you can believe me when I say I need a little break from constant re-visioning I've been doing for the past month or so. I need to be writing something new, rather than working and scrubbing something that I've already made before.

And if you were all wondering that I was going to stop writing here once I become a published author, please don't. Fimfiction is my proving ground, the place I go to practice and test new ideas. Even if my new book becomes wildly successful, that will only mean an increase in chapters on fimfiction, because I'll no longer have to work at walmart to support myself and my family.

That being said, if you guys wanted to help me by prereading what I've completed, send me a message, and I'll give you a link. You have to promise not to spread the link to my master document around, though, since this is going to become a published work that I'll be charging money for.

Comments ( 5 )

Awesome.

While it would be great to help you pre-read to find any left over errors, that is something I suck at so it would be of very very little benefit to you for me to try. I am interested in reading your changed up version though, so good luck on getting it published.:twilightsmile:

I've very much enjoyed the original version and liked the changes you made to make it your original world. I'd like to see where it goes. I am perfectly happy to wait and pay for a published version but if you really need another proof reader I would enjoy reading it, though I would be taking it a whole lot more seriously than I have been.

Loved the original series, easily one of the best trilogies I have ever read. It would be an honour to pre-read your book and help you in any way you need with it. :D
Keep on writing my dude

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