Chapter 2 is Revamped! · 7:17am Jul 17th, 2018
... Again.
Ok, so I know I already did this, but there were two scenes I felt that needed a good brush up. I decided that the scene where Phisa kills a pony in cold blood set the wrong tone and honestly isn't true to her character. At the time I didn't really think it'd bother me so much but now, now I just wanted to change that scene to better fit what I wanted from Phisa. The other scene changed was the one after that, to keep in line the changes I made before. Hopefully, this will be the last time I ever go back to edit Chapter 2. Hopefully
In other news, work on the sixth chapter is making progress. I have a dozen pages in it's rough draft done and am forcing myself to get as much to get Dead End updated as soon as possible. Until next time, here's a recent commission of Phisa drawn by Amura-of-Jupiter!
