a dark competition

so me and a friend of mine have been talking and i wanna hear your ideas so how about this the pony who can come up with the most horrifying excruciating painful and humiliating death for shining armour will get the chance to see the next few chapters early and their idea will be used

Comments

[coldsong]

trap him in the Tsukuyomi and rip him apart atom by atom

[lunaslove]

4900806
good one

[lunaslove]

Seriously no one's gonna try

[Nova Eclipse]

Try humiliating him by making him lose in front of every royal guard, then beat him up repeating, then break his bones with a giant hammer, then rip out his horn while having a seal on which makes him feel pain ten times as painful, then just in case if he's losing conscience, put a seal on him so he won't fall conscience and keep him like that until u feel satisfied and can finally release him so he can die. After that, take his soul and absorb it so he can suffer for all entirety. FINALLY, consume his body so u can get his strong shield, modify it, and make it ur own sheild.

[lunaslove]

4907547
Could be darker or more gorey but that's a good one

[Nova Eclipse]

Eh, I tried.

[lunaslove]

4907576
Still either way it was good but I'm looking for something like

Turning shining into a mara the tentacle raping her in all possible orifices and pores with sharp barbs on the tentacles

[Nova Eclipse]

Jeezies, that is much more gory and bestest way of killing shining armor. Can't wait to read this when it comes out. By the way, what are u going to call this story.

[lunaslove]

4907590
ASURA'S DARKER ADVENTURES

[Nova Eclipse]

..., wasn't expecting that, not in a bad way, but in a more curious ways.

[lunaslove]

4907608
wel just you wait and see

[Nova Eclipse]

By the way, when are u planning on releasing this story and are u going to make it a displace or not.

[lunaslove]

4907935
I'm making it now exactly the same way as nonferus did

[Nova Eclipse]

That's great, can't wait for it.

[Resadur164]

my idea is you know what happened to swift wing, and what happened to blue blood multiply that and with everything on fire
but only after shining try's something stupid as in attempts to assassinate our mc or cadence something like that then with Celestia and Luna have him chained in like the central plaza area of the crystal empire stripping him of all his titles his belongings and having a magic projection showing all his horrid deeds above them further cementing this bastard being effed that's when our mc takes the reigns and goes to deliver his punishment and proceeds to do my idea

(I'm saying mc cause are you going with ash asura or some other name id be ok with any so long as he remains a he cause it would be awkward to have a harem of mares with a female mc *I'm not against it I'm just saying with don't get cocky's storyline its awkward* so there is that)

[Nova Eclipse]

4909999
That's a really good punishment. Great job on the effort u put on to it.

[Resadur164]

4910003
hey its the don't get cocky verse shining armour who is a speciesist racist xenophobic arse had to think of one of the worst ways to die

[lunaslove]

4909999
nice one but just so you know im continuing where nosferus left off

[Nova Eclipse]

Awww, are u still going to kill shining armor.

[lunaslove]

4910043
FUCK YEAH IN FACT LOOK FOR MY RESPONSE TO 4907576 THEN YOULL REMEMBER
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH

[Nova Eclipse]

Oh yeah, now I remember.

[lunaslove]

4910151
HAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHA

DONT MESS WITH SOMEONE WHO HAS A POWER COMPLEX

[Nova Eclipse]

ok

[shadowgod3211]

4910229 i got 1 put a spell on him that makes him feel 60 pain even after death and then beat the crap out of him then heal him with magic then break his legs mobster style and then cut off his arms then put it under a extremely painful illusion then have the illusion kill him then bring him back then put another spell on him that makes him feel pain that is 150x the amount of pain then smash him around hulk style then put acid/black light onto his ballz then put him in a hybrid of xenomorph acid and lava from a super volcano and then extremely painfully torture his soul with anything you can think of to the ends of time

[lunaslove]

4925795
nice one but about the illusion thing what about tsukuyomi

[shadowgod3211]

4925865
hmmm that could work

[lunaslove]

4926120
Yeeeeesss

[Chris Russell]

4907605
why ASURA'S DARKER ADVENTURES?

[lunaslove]

4944434
It's all I could come up with plus his life is going to be a lot more messes up

[Chris Russell]

4944469
like what PM

[lunaslove]

4944476
What?