Oct
29th
2012
I....need help..... · 5:21pm Oct 29th, 2012
Ok, so I’ve been trying to update dragon of the night, quite a bit in the last week. This as you can all see has not been successful. This post is me asking for help. I know how I want the story to go and I have it laid out quite far but I cannot get chapter 2 right. It always feels wrong and I end up scrapping whatever I make. I would like it if someone was willing to give me some suggestions as what to do. Thank you for reading this and everyone know, I won't let the story die.
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LunarGuardian · 275 views
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Maybe explaining the events leading up to spikes rampage have Luna talk to Twilight and her reactions to spike going of again. I got a feeling the ponies of pony-ville are not happy about the second rampage
457941 That's what i was going for, but i can't seem to get the scene to feel right. It alwasy seems to me that the emotions are off. I either make everyone too depressed or it is as if they don't care.