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Robot Sparky


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  • 117 weeks
    Storry edit progess thingy

    1. it is not going well.
    2. last day of school, so more time to work on it.
    3. it will have to be delayed by a lot, my writing (in terms of people talking to each other) has not improved much.
    4. I'm sorry, i failed my original deadline for my self.

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  • 128 weeks
    I made a thing

    I made a short story... I think anyways. here we go, oh and I typed it in notepad so if it looks weird that's why.


    We started small, a labyrinth. The walls were outlined in white. We explored, moving as a camera on rails would. I decided to make an exit the the labyrinth we found

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  • 130 weeks
    Story re-write

    So I took a look at my story today... I think I died, what the Heck was I thinking? Not only is it well... Everything bad, I also used far, Far, FAR to much of the script from the show as either a copy paste or very bad(or badly used) inspiration. So instead of re-making the story entirely(although it might as well be a complete rewrite). I'm going to just rewrite the first chapter's of my story

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  • 131 weeks
    the best thing ever

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  • 131 weeks
    quick update

    So I'm updating my profile. Adding more information to the personality board, editing the board, and a few other things. just posting this as a quick informational update, if you want to contribute to the update either post a comment here or on my profile, contributors to the personality board will be given credit at the bottom.

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Jun
22nd
2018

Storry edit progess thingy · 7:27pm Jun 22nd, 2018

1. it is not going well.
2. last day of school, so more time to work on it.
3. it will have to be delayed by a lot, my writing (in terms of people talking to each other) has not improved much.
4. I'm sorry, i failed my original deadline for my self.
now that, that is out of the way. I would like to formally apologize for not doing much work on the story, my main issue is with making character dialogue not sound like two social recluses trying and failing to talk, and trust me it is not going well. Upsides! summer break started so i now have more time to do things like writing, and drawing, and making dialogue sound, read, and look better. So worry not I'm working on it, but there have been delays like this... dialogue problem, holding up the story upgrades.

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