Sunday Peep Show... · 4:53pm Jun 3rd, 2018
I asked if y'all wanted to some previews of upcoming stuff and the answer was yes, so here's the inaugural Sunday Peep Show.
First, from Spring Has Sprung, chapter two:
Glacier nodded as he stared at the knuckles of his right hand. Two of them had blood on them; his father's blood. The sight of it started to make his stomach churn as what happened about twenty minutes earlier had finally set in.
“S-Soarin? Can you stop the truck a moment?” Glacier asked shakily.
“Sure. You're not looking too good, G,” Soarin said as he pulled the truck off to the side of the road. “Do you need to go to the hospital?”
Instead of answering, Glacier literally jumped out of the truck and emptied his stomach contents on the ground. After a minute or two of throwing up, Glacier sat down on the ground being careful to avoid his vomit. Soarin squatted down in front of him so they could talk eye to eye.
“G, what's going on? This isn't normal for you,” Soarin asked with concern. “You didn't kill your old man, did you?”
From Cause And Distress, chapter four:
Twilight then quickly pulled her hoof away and fired a powerful magic beam at Sunset, aimed directly at the orange pony’s heart. Sunset went flying backward into a tree, rendering her unconscious.
“Sunset!” Lyra shouted as she bolted to her tutor. “Are you okay?” She stopped between them so that Twilight couldn't hit Sunset with another blast of magic, turned her attention to Twilight and angrily yelled, “Twilight, what in Equestria did you do that for?”
“Lyra, she's not a pony. She's one of those human things you're always rambling about in our group sessions. She bullies other humans and can transform into a demon,” Twilight argued. “She's dangerous and you need to get the royal guard.”
And finally from my next piece, currently dubbed "Project Shy".
Letting out a sigh, Fluttershy closed the door to unlock the security latch so that she could accommodate Rainbow's request. The two girls walked to the den and, after moving a few animals, sat down on opposing chairs in an awkward silence.
“Well?” Fluttershy asked, trying to hide the annoyed tone in her voice.
“Oh, right. I noticed that you've been a little upset-”
“A little upset?” Fluttershy interrupted.
“Okay, very upset and probably angry with me over what I had said in the band room the other day,” Rainbow relented. “AJ and Pinkie read me the riot act yesterday after you left with Rarity. So, I guess what I'm trying to say is that I'm sorry. I wasn't thinking when I said what I said and just blurted the first thing that came out of my mouth. I really am sorry, Fluttershy.”
Now I'm not giving any dates for any of these because I normally work on these during my lunch breaks and you can only do so much in thirty minutes.
Man, your stuff's pretty good for thirty minute bursts.
That Fluttershy project. That intrigues me. It also intrigues me that Twilight would so readily blast Sunset like that.
4875932 I mainly do my writing at work while I have ideas fresh in my mind and the grammar/spell check when I get home. Regarding Twilight's blasting of Sunset, you have to remember that Twilight is a confused filly with a disability in that fic.
Hence the reason for an automatic blasting.
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Right! Right. I remember now. Still, though. She's good friends with Sunset. How would she-OOOOoooohhhhh. This probably has something to do with the sudden time-displacement thing. Or am I thinking of another fic?
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Not so much time displacement but more of a mild form of dementia.
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...huh. Now that I think about it, that makes sense. The way I originally saw it was Filly Twilight and Adult Twilight getting caught in some magical temporal distortion illness. Mostly because of how she acted from Celestia's point of view. Now I'm not so sure what happened. I'm sure I'll figure it out later, though.