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Do not stand at my grave and weep, I am not there. I do not sleep.

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    This is my goodbye.

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  • 115 weeks
    Update!

    First: I want to apologize for the inactivity I involving myself in the site. My family got COVID-19 Omicron, and I was moving all of January, and doing a bit of soul searching. But Iā€™m back, and continuing to try to pump content out.

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    I feel like I'm being taunted...


    :pinkiesmile:

    :pinkiesmile:<{šŸ˜­}

    I hold no ill will to the story.

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  • 160 weeks
    New Story

    New story just came out today, Check it out and let me know what you think.

    :moustache:šŸ‘‰Story is herešŸ‘ˆ:moustache:

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  • 166 weeks
    Valentines Day

    It's Valentines day, and I have a large thing of Dots in my closet that I'm gonna shove in my mouth.
    They're been unopened, so don't worry about me.

    Happy Valentines Day.
    From Pen Heart

    Stay tuned for more stories by me.

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Apr
13th
2018

Reviewing "Why I Stopped Watching MLP" by Opium4TmassS · 5:10pm Apr 13th, 2018

First time I posted something. Don't judge my typing.
The story itself was well made on so many levels.
One being, why there wasn't enough episodes on Season 3. This is something many bonies have been asking, but not me.
Second, DOLLS. I love dolls and, heck, POSSESSED dolls. While this is a mechanic people have been cringing about, this story makes it seem to match more. On a serious note, don't make another Slappy the Dummy. Goosebumps is okay with doing this, not everyone else.
Finally, a view of the outside world. Not many stories do that, and I think this can really be a good thing to see in some MLP Fanfics.
Overall: 9/10

Also where's Rarity?

Comments ( 6 )

Thank you for the review.

4844035
On a serious note, what happened to :raritystarry:?



I can only imagine what would happen...

4845934
I want to keep it ambiguous. Let the reader decide.

4845959
Oh, I guess that makes sense.
Also, I think the dolls are possessed by the spirits of little girls.

4846554
OK I'll give you a brief history to help you: In 1985 Hasbro created a new cartoon show to promote a new line of girls toys as you may know the show was call My Little Pony. However unlike our wold the show was a complete flop quickly overshadowed by other more popular cartoons of the time. Because of the loss Hasbro quickly folded the show. Which is why no one has really heard of the show in this world. Also in this world their are only two generations of mlp.

In 2008-2009 Hasbro decided to reboot the series spear headed by a man named Simon Kuklachelovek (Discord) well known in the industry for creating hit cartoon shows worth millions.

However, in between the Flutterschmooze event and its 10/10/2010 world premier the entire show vanished along with Simon and not just the show but all the art work, scripts, including the line of toys being produced. So Hasbro once again folded the MLP show.

Shortly after that is when people started to vanish which leads us to now. A world that slowly is falling apart.

I hope this helps you to understand.

4846578
That makes total sense

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