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  • 162 weeks
    Sweetolebob18 injury

    Sweetolebob18 was a top proof-reader of Tails or Innocence and Tails of Sacrefice. Two months ago, he had a car accident, and now he require 6500 $ for knee operation, which he can't affod.

    I can't afford to help myself, but if any of you is capable of assisting him in anyway, I am certain he will be most grateful.

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    2 comments · 1,183 views
  • 190 weeks
    Chapter 15 - Two small scene changes

    Hello everyone. Just wanted to inform you that based on feedback from "RebelRogue12" and with his help, I altered two scenes.

    It is nothing much, but thought I should inform you regardless. Added stuff is marked in bold:

    Scene one:

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    1 comments · 742 views
  • 191 weeks
    Scene change - Celestia's motivation - Feedback needed

    Hello all fans of this story. Due to high controversy regarding Celestia's actions and received feedback, I decided to expand on Celestia's scene to give better reasoning behind her actions.

    Sure, what she did is still a desperate and bold move, but I hope what I added will make it more understandeable and improve quality of the story.

    Added scene is marked in bold:

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    4 comments · 453 views
  • 191 weeks
    Scene change - Kyuubi's injury - Feedback needed

    Hello everyone.

    Considering the feedback, I came to conclusion that the scene where Shining Armor injured Kyuubi seemed more harsh and more intentional than I intended, so I decided to add minor changes.
    Also, it was pointed out to me that tails don't bleed, so I decided to adress it as well.

    Here is the altered scene, changed as marked in bold:

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    6 comments · 338 views
  • 195 weeks
    I appologize for the delay in updating

    Greetings all readers and fans of "Tails of Innocence"

    I would like to appologize for this long delay in updating this story. There are two reasons behind it:
    1) Chapter 9 felt rushed to me and I had difficulty figuring out how to expand on it in a satisfying way, but I finally succeded. I can only hope it will be enough.

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Mar
24th
2018

Side story "Raichu for Hire" · 8:49pm Mar 24th, 2018

Greetings all fans of Nica and her adventures in Equestria.

I would like to inform you all about the side-story I uploaded and explain the meaning behind it.

Originally I planned to keep the story "Little Lost Raichu" to be 24 chapters long with Epilogue at the end, however, in chapter 18 I thought that skipping on Nica's attempt to work for ponies as hired help to repay their kindness and friendship was too good to skip, but the main story was already too long as it was (and since side-story focus on Nica's adventures as a mercenary with more comedic approach, and most of it involve traveling away form Ponyville, I felt that it would be best to keep it separated).

I decided to upload side-story that takes place in between chapter 18 and 19 (I will now start updating the side-story, and once it is over, I will continue uploading the main story again).

Link - Raichu for Hire

The side story will be 12 chapters long (Most chapters will be shorter than usual) with epilogue at the end, and considering that it will take a long time before main story update again, I encourage you all to give this side-story a chance and show it some support. I guarantee that it's worth reading, and if you faved/upvoted the main story, I would be really happy if you supported the side-story as well.

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