Twilight slumped back on her throne in Canterlot Palace. “You know, Spike,” she said, “this isn’t really what I thought ruling Equestria would be like.”
“Oh yeah?” He glanced down at the schedule in his talons. “Your next appointment is in five minutes, by the way.”
Well, it took me a week or two in order to get up the gumption to write, a week to write it, and then a week of downtime before I went back into it so the typos would show up right.
However, I refuse to take credit for the delay. I actually got mine done. (Although I should go back in and fix this one typo...)
A week is a good amount of time for people to add some extra polish to their story, too. Anyone that wants a second pair of eyes should remember that the Mentors channel in the Writeoff Discord is available to them. With school getting busy again I can't guarantee that I'll be available, but I'll make an effort to remain online.
Well, an extra week will give me plenty of time to prune superfluous commas from the thing. Also to figure out how to actually submit a fic to the writeoff thingy.
Here's a collection of the spare commas I've eliminated so far: ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Whuf. That third, there is a pretty bad one. Good thing you caught it. That critter would have gotten all up in your sentence construction. Started a nest.
Well, it took me a week or two in order to get up the gumption to write, a week to write it, and then a week of downtime before I went back into it so the typos would show up right.
However, I refuse to take credit for the delay. I actually got mine done. (Although I should go back in and fix this one typo...)
YAY! Another week's worth of time to procrastinate! :D
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CURSE YOOOU!
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YOU KNEW WHAT YOU WERE GETTING INTO, JAXIE! YOU KNEW.
Huh.
Well.
I guess I have some time to revise it, then. I thought I was done done.
A week is a good amount of time for people to add some extra polish to their story, too. Anyone that wants a second pair of eyes should remember that the Mentors channel in the Writeoff Discord is available to them. With school getting busy again I can't guarantee that I'll be available, but I'll make an effort to remain online.
Well, an extra week will give me plenty of time to prune superfluous commas from the thing. Also to figure out how to actually submit a fic to the writeoff thingy.
Here's a collection of the spare commas I've eliminated so far:
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Whuf. That third, there is a pretty bad one. Good thing you caught it. That critter would have gotten all up in your sentence construction. Started a nest.