Butterflies in your Stomach · 12:24pm Mar 8th, 2018
This is the first fanfic I have ever wrote and it is a very long work in progress. I am completely happy with any opinions or tips for it since I literally have no idea what I am doing. It is called 'Butterflies in your Stomach'. It's a fic about Flutterspike cause that is a ship that I sail proudly. I am also posting it as a blog post since it's only about 400 words so far.
“Rarity, what do you think of me?”
“Oh, sweetie, you know I—“
“No… for real”
Thump
Spike groaned as his head hit the crystal table for the second time today; the pain was the only thing keeping him from nodding off again.
“Spike, are you alright?” Twilight asked him. He doesn’t even look up…
“Oh, just dandy, Twilight” he answered with the utmost enthusiasm. “Just hoping this feeling of death will stop soon.”
“Are you sure you’re feeling alright? You looked like you were having a bad dream.” Twilight asked.
Spike shook his head, “No, no I’m fine. I’ve just been doing some thinking—“
Twilight chuckled, “Did it hurt?”
“Twilight shut it; I’m being serious."
"I’m finally going to tell Rarity how I feel about her!” Spike exclaimed.
“’Finally going to’?” Twilight asked, “Oh, Spike, she already knows how you feel about her, everyone does.”
“No Twilight, I mean really tell her.” Spike said
“Everyone acts like they know how I feel about her,” Spike growled. “They don’t know a damn thing about us…”
Twilight sighed, “Spike… you need to know that we all-“
Spike slammed his fist on the table, “No, Twilight!”
“I’m tired of all these excuses and lies,”
Spike began to cry, “I… I just need to know that I’m not wasting my life trying to get something that will never truly be mine…”
Twilight pauses for a moment, “Spike, you know that I can never understand her true feelings for you. But you also know that we all love you!”
“I just don’t want you to get hurt and not physically, but emotionally.”
Spike wiped the tears from his eyes. He began to smile as he looked Twilight in the eyes, “Thank you, but this is something that I have to do.”
He stood up as he began to leave, “I don’t know when I will be back, so take care for now, Twilight.”
Before he made it to the door, Twilight ran up to him, “Spike, wait!”
Spike stopped, still looking forward, “Look, this is just something that I have to do and you aren’t going to stop me.”
“Spike I—“Before Twilight could even finish her sentence, Spike had already left.
Twilight sighed as she looked up at the sky, “Oh, Celestia, I just hope he doesn’t get his heart broken…”
That's all I've got so far. I know it 'aint much but I am happy with it. Any thoughts?
Well it does sound interesting.