Five Star Service - chapter revamp update

After some discussion with my prereaders as to how best redo the climactic scene, most notably AJ_Aficionado who offered some very good advice, I believe I have settled on a new approach.

So, here's what's going to happen: the closing Attorney section will be expanded from two chapters to three, with the two existing chapters acting as bookends to a brand-new full-length middle chapter that will contain all the adult content and a completely remade climactic scene. The first chapter has already been (re)released, while the third chapter will be stripped of its current opening scene and instead open with the aftermath.

I actually think the aftermath portion of the chapter is pretty good as written, so changes there will (mostly) be tweaks to make it better fit the new content. This way, those of you who don't care to read about this character in an adult situation do not have to; you can simply skip it and go right to the third (aftermath) chapter, which will have its updates posted when the middle chapter releases. Just as with the previous chapter, I will have my prereading team of AJ_Aficionado, Silentwoodfire, Leo Archon and Denim_Blue hit this thing as hard as they can to make bloody well sure it's good and worthy of both the story and characters, which my previous attempt at this scene cateogrically was not.

As for when all this will happen, I'm hoping within a week or two. To be sure, there are personal complications at the moment; work is difficult right now, and as it turns out, I have yet more surgery on the way, this to fix an increasingly painful tailor's bunion on my right foot. Unfortunately, this involves breaking and resetting the bone, which will lay me up for some time. Maybe I can use the down time to get some significant writing in, at least...