The After-Sex Smoke #3: Back Alley Drag · 8:01am Feb 5th, 2018
Welcome to the After-Sex Smoke! This is a blogging series for the story of the day. Today we’ll be talking about the spawn of hell that is LewdChapter, and how I’ve been hypnotized into writing a fic for his birthday. Specifically, Back Alley Drag.
This is going to be short, since I’m writing on the clock, kinda, and I’m super tired as I upload this (so expect all the horrid “it’s” - “its” mixups to be amplified by a thousand, m’kay?)
Anyway, congrats to LewdChapter for living this long! If you didn’t know, it’s his birthday today, and I thought I might as well commemorate it with something he likes. Well, it’s not horrible death rape, but it’s kinda close.
If you kept up with the last one, and you’re wondering if this is the second story to test my new writing style, it’s not. I plan everything perfectly and never make a mistake, so that’s been pushed back in lieu of this one. Yay schedules!
Finally, I thought I’d leave the review of the porn up to the birthday boi. He’ll probably comment somewhere saying how much he liked it/wanted to banish it to oblivion. Have fun with that!
Anyway, that’s all there is! Speak in the comments of this blog or the story itself, if you’re a lazy pea, and tell me what you liked/want to see me work on. I’m not super sure about this new writing thing I’m trying out, so a comment would be greatly appreciated.
Thanks for your time, and I’ll see you next time on the After-Sex Smoke!
Me: Every Birthday is just another way to start anew!
LewdChapter: Really? Can't wait to see how the new me fucks up! It'll be something, I'm sure.
You nailed it, for the most part. Granted, it was a bit hard for me to read because my erection kept blocking the screen, but that was kinda the point, right?
I will say that you need to neaten up your in-scene continuity. There's a few scenes where you seemingly forgot what Snails was doing and then had him do something else entirely (you once say that he has his back to tell wal, then immediately after have him lean back to show off his ass). Granted, I know you rushed to finish this so it would release on my birthday, so I'm willing to forgive that.
In any case, I thank you for writing such a wonderful story for me, a trap fic despite your baffling heterosexuality. It makes me feel bad that I didn't write you a gift for your birthday. Hm... time to take a look through your fetish folder, it seems.
Anyway, thanks again. Now, if you excuse me, I'm gonna go beat my dick like it owes .even money.