The Mare in the Warp 2.0 · 12:07am Jan 19th, 2018
Hello, everyone!
Here are some news about what I've been doing.
As promised I'm working on the Mare in the Warp and it's going along pretty well though slowlier than I expected (life is sometimes a frustrating mess). So what have I been doing so far? Well plenty.
Firstly, I'm adding some minor details to the story. It's nothing much and you don't have to reread it, but for new readers and people unfamiliar with Warhammer 40k, it should be easier to understand. I'm also adding a few descriptions and lines of dialogue. Once again, nothing much.
Secondly (and that's the part that is going to be a bit messy), I'm moving some parts from one chapter to the other or in separate chapters. I think it makes the progression of the story smoother and more coherent. I hope it achieves this goal.
Lastly and more importantly, I'm correcting the huge number of mistakes, typos and fault in the story. This part is surprisingly the easiest (mostly because I've got some help). A friend night also help me soon, if they have the time and energy to do so.
I should finish the corrections by the end of the month and start writng the next part right after.
Thanks again for your patience, and may the Empress be with you.
Looking forward to seeing the new chapter when it comes out!
4776791
Thanks for your inexhaustible patience ^^
You know, I have to ask, are you going to incorporate Primaris Marines?
PS. I just bought my first 40k set and am and currently assembling/painting it
4776852
Ooh nice, which army?
4776863
I saw you comment on my story, I think you can guess
4776852
I would love to but I don't think they'd fit the story... I may write a spin-off with some Primaris mares though...
4777103
You mean Primareis marines?