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sunnypack


Although it left it, it knew that it was right, it made it down, because it didn't know what's up.

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  • 94 weeks
    You were the Chosen One!

    Alas, it was not so.

    So as many of you may have surmised, I have violently but silently passed away.

    That is to say I am dead.

    Not in the literal sense, but possibly in the literary sense.

    To make things short, I had a bit of a breakdown, a couple of other mundane life-things and a lack of time to even consider writing.

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    12 comments · 687 views
  • 161 weeks
    Microstory X - Awkward Twilight

    It happened at a bookstore.

    "Hello," said the clerk.

    "Morning," Twilight mumbled back.

    The clerk returned a strained smile back and then went back to work.

    Twilight then realised in her half-tired state that it wasn't morning, it was the evening, the store was closed and it wasn't a bookstore, and the clerk wasn't there and she had been talking to a cardboard sign all this time.

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    3 comments · 412 views
  • 162 weeks
    Microstory IX - The Existence

    Before Twilight could say anything, Pinkie held up her hoof.

    "Twilight, stop, before you say anything. I have to say something!"

    Silence followed.

    "What were you going to say?"

    "...I forgot."

    "Pinkie... what are you doing on my doorstep?"

    "Twilight, you have to help me with my application!"

    "What's this?" She held the documents up. "These look like job... rejections?"

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    5 comments · 322 views
  • 192 weeks
    Micro Story VIII - The Rock

    It started with a slight clicking sound.

    Like the fingernails tapping on a tabletop.

    Click. Click. Click.

    There it sat on her desk.

    The rock.

    Eyes fixated on the inanimate object, Twilight examined it with such rigour.

    But it stood still.

    Yet still was that sound.

    Click. Click. Click.

    Then a different sound.

    Crack.

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    7 comments · 396 views
  • 206 weeks
    Micro Story VII

    Twilight glanced out the windows at the dim backdrop of stars.

    Night time, she thought, and lazily went back to reading.

    Then she returned back to the window.

    No wait, that's space!

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Jan
18th
2018

Micro Story IV · 11:00am Jan 18th, 2018

There was a noise in the bushes, which startled a pegasus crossing by it.

Fluttershy stared at the bush intensely, her eyes wide and afraid.

"What are you doin' Flutters?" Rainbow was curious, seeing her friend so shaken.

"I-I-I-It made a noise!" Fluttershy yelped, quaking in her hooves. "It 'rustled', 'snapped' and 'crackled'!"

"Big deal, they make noises all the time!" Rainbow exclaimed.

"Rustle," said the bush, "snap and crackle."

Later that day, Twilight found two ponies staring at a bush intensely.


I'm a quack.

Bonus:

"Where did Winona go?" Applebloom was staring out the window. "She was here only yesterday."

Granny's movements paused like they always did whenever she brought it up.

"Aww, Applebloom, Winona's on an important job. She's delivering something important to Applejack. Somewhere only Winona can go."

"I miss her."

Granny smiled sadly as she brought Applebloom close to her chest and hugged her tight as damp tears matted her coat.

"I do too, sweetie, I miss them both dearly too..."

Winona was on a mission to Applejack, but this journey was like no other she had taken before. Still, she had to try, there was something inside of her that knew Applejack desperately needed her. Or that maybe she was missing something too, and that made her search all the harder.

P.S. Good dog.

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Comments ( 5 )

A comedy piece offset by the feels at the end.
Damn you, I have no idea what to feel anymore.
Hug?

First you made me laugh. Then you give a kick in the feels. :fluttershyouch:

Good ones, though.

I want to see the first one turned into a genre horror story about a monster that doesn't mesh correctly with the universe. Ponies that can even perceive it at all replace the sight with something mundane they would normally expect in its location.

So thanks for that.

4776432

Could also be the world's worst Changeling Infiltrator? One so bad that everypony in Ponyville takes pity on the 'ling and plays along with their "attempts" attempts at not being detected.

p.s. It's Kevin the changeling.

Good dog? No.

Best dog.

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