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Doctor Fluffy


struggling new hampshire college student.

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  • 52 weeks
    I LIVED

    So, GOOD NEWS EVERYONE! At least, for the five of you that care about Lair of The Badalisc after I routinely go months without updating it.
    Anyway. I'm at a place where I could (potentially?) end Lair of The Badalisc chapter 5. but I'm not a hundred percent sure yet. At the very least, I'm 66-75% of the way through it, and there's about two more scenes I need to write.

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  • 84 weeks
    Writing progress

    I learned my lesson from last time, so I actually have a small bit of chapter 5 written out. In the meantime, I'm taking a short break and will get to the next chapter by next week or so.

    In the meantime, I'm also gonna try and work on a one-shot featuring Pinkie or Izzy.

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  • 88 weeks
    well that didn't work

    Okay, so Lair of The Badalisc's latest chapter was not finished three days ago. But.. the draft's nearly finished, I just need a day to myself to hammer it out, watch some MLP FiM to get in the mood, and we're golden.

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  • 90 weeks
    Lair of The badalisc new chapter

    So, good news and bad news - the new chapter is CLOSE to done... but not finished. It'll be done by august 10th at least, probably.

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  • 93 weeks
    New chapter

    I, uh... wow

    Okay, I'm sorry it's taken practically a year to do chapter 3 of LoB, for everyone here. I've just been hung up on.... a lot of other projects. Got a job, wrote a lot of Warframe stuff, done a lot of WF art...

    BUT

    I've got another chapter planned for THIS MONTH! And maybe also a one-shot also releasing this month. I got plans.

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Dec
27th
2017

Cancelled · 4:41pm Dec 27th, 2017

It is a sad occasion, sad enough that I cannot greet any of my regular readers by typing the word "HUMPADUMP" repeatedly. What is this occasion?

Light Despondent was just cancelled.

(Also, the chapter title "Let It Die" was totally unintentional, I was just feeling a bit more Suda 51 than usual about 9 months ago when I titled that chapter)

I don't like that I had to cancel my favorite project (I know, I was very subtle about it) before I finished what I wanted to do either. But I also like the concept of writing in the classicsverse even less than that, because the classicsverse is fundamentally broken.

Though I spent years on Spectrum, writing alongside my friends, I stand by that assertion. Fundamentally. Broken. The HLF were written too much like Mad Max-style bandits but with less self-restraint, which led to things getting a bit plot-tumor-ish in Light. The main story meandered into filler that reminds me of the longstanding training segments in Dragonball Z without the training, few villains were all that interesting, Discord is portrayed as the hero despite acting as an even bigger dick than in canon, Celestia (which one? Yes) is supremely out of character, Princess Celestia is a weepy mess. Marcus Renee exists.

Considering that Light was originally planned to have Marcus shoot a pregnant woman, with no punishment, and no hint that was even A Bad Thing, I don't think I need to say more about that last one. [/rant]

And I'm sorry if things get cut short here, but the simple fact is: Spectrum is moving forward, and Light must move forward with it. It has been my belief that the story's supremely clunky beginning was what turned off a lot of people, so I have rebooted the story with what I believe to be the strongest part. Many of the things in the beginning - the wildly uneven tone, the clunky nature of it - must be brought up to the standards of the new main spectrum story, and my skill level as a writer.

Except Philistine. That's my favorite chapter, it'll probably be mostly the same, except for Yael shooting Kraber with this cannon from F.E.A.R. He'll survive, of course.


(bitches love cannons)

Anyway, if you want to see Light redone at my current level of skill, with a better first few chapters, then come on down and read The Light Despondent - Remixed!" The story is absolutely not ending, it's just going to be different. There'll be more viewpoint characters, more plot, (This can mean either story or exactly what you think it does) and more...

Well, you'll just have to find out. I hope you appreciate the changes I've made.

The Light Despondent - Remixed

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Insert "Its alive!" meme here. Which is more than I can say about my computer right now. I'll be sure to post the obligatory YouTube video into the first chapter once I'm no longer typing from my tablet.

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