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Raptormon132


Blind Commentator, Actor, Voice Actor, Analyst/Reviewer, and Writer

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Dec
4th
2017

A Pop Star, a Princess, and a Prisoner further Changes, as Well as A New Prequel Story to Those Who Did Not know, and New Sequels to "I Will Not Fail" Coming soon. · 4:33am Dec 4th, 2017

Hey, guys.
Raptormon132 here. Just another blog to inform everyone of my "A Pop Star, a Princess, and a Prisoner" fans, and fans of "I Will Not Fail".

First, I have just made some more additional changes to the main story. I'll list them below.

1. I have added more dialog in the brief flashbacks in chapters 3 and 6.

2. I added that Storm Dasher drinks alcohol to sooth himself. And that he was drinking when he confronted Abacus in the cemetery with Coco-Nut, and Officers Strike Law and Rogue Order. And after he and Coco-Nut served their two month jail sentence, he gives away all the liquor he had left in his house to Rehab and Lock Down, as one of the starts of trying to get better again for the sake of Scootaloo, and himself. I'm doing this as an experiment to see if it will improve Storm Dasher's character a little better.

3. I changed that the members of Task Force River from Sydneigh are members of the FPI (Federal Ponies of Investigation) in Sydneigh, an Equestrian version of the FBI (Federal Bureau of Investigation). This idea was inspired back when I was writing the dark, foal rape story, Sex Play, since they had a character who was part of the FPI. I know that the FBI does not operate in Australia, but who cares anyway?

4. Mayor Mare reveals something to everyone in chapter 23, a secret that will have you guessing on what it was.

Those are the changes I've done. I hope they are okay.

In other news, in case some of you are not aware, I have recently started the new sequel to "A Pop Star, a Princess, and a Prisoner". It is called "A Prisoner's Suffering". It's the story of what Abacus Sum suffered when he was framed by the investigation force from Canterlot for killing his wife and unborn child, and taken away to Hoofstrong Prison Center. And the first part of the chapter is out. And another part of the first chapter is on the way. Do give it a like, and even add it to your favourites to show your support.

And finally, I have plans to start sequels to my story, "I Will Not Fail". To those who do not know, it's a Star Wars/MLP crossover story set in My Little Pony: The Movie, only it involves the dark lord of the sith himself, Darth Vader being in it.
I started to write this story because of my fascination with Tempest Shadow in the MLP Movie, and how I and many others have compared her to Darth Vader. I even wrote it after finding an art image by EJLightning007arts on Deviantart, which I got permission to use his image as the cover image for the story. Image is below.

For a while people have asked for sequels, so I have decided to go for it and more sequels, since it's became a bit of a hit. I even asked EJLightning007arts himself to make more images to use as cover images for the stories. And plan to make 5 sequels to it, and {Spoiler Alert} Darth Vader will die in the last one.


So guys those are the bits of news I wanted to give to you guys.

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