The grammar and spelling errors, The universe for the Omega timeline

First off is a comment that I got yesterday that help with some negative press about the way the story is heading. The person goes by the name Grave Walker and here is what he had to say.

The description just by itself is a dead giveaway and looks like it was just written as a sudden idea and left as that. And I'm counting the rest of this typed... stuff is... Well... I'll just assume the rest is just as cancerous honestly. For I not even dare tread down this path. And I can survive reading through constantly repetitive styled Displaced stories...

Truth be told, I originally came here to see the shit show and finish my leftover popcorn after watching Terminator 3... I think there's some ice cream in the freezer...

James Cribb
Weather that statement is complete bullshit or not, I don't give a damn. Age does not factor in one's true wisdom. Thus, it doesn't change the fact that people are killing this one straight outta the box. I suggest you be honest with yourself and figure out on improving yourself. I, truth be told, made a horrid first fan fic on this site.Grammar nazis be rolling out of their graves at it's many crimes to even exist. And I got pretty much the equal amount of reception as you are getting as well... But I (thankfully) learned my lesson and continue to improve from my many, many mistakes throughout my time on this site and in the real world. I hope you don't go Sonic Joker (or whatever the fuck is his name is now) and block out any slight criticism. Good or bad, it helps to admit and learn from those mistakes.

Please, if at all, take my honest advice.

Heed my words, young one. Train yourself as a decent warrior and plan for clear victory. But if heeding only to your own, so be it. Go and waste it all, ludicrously flailing into battle like a mindless savage. It will only get you hurting yourself and even killed. As it is so with countless more wasted.

Now that I can respect that for helping a new writer and what he when through with his first story. Now I know the first story is not that good I try to fix the problem with what I got.

Now for the Equestrian timeline, The timeline in their world takes three years after season 7 from the canon timeline. The timeline doesn't start until the Peace of Omega enters their world.

The Omega timeline for the story takes place five years te M.R. Series was shut down and the portals to Earth close and me being trapped here with no way home. It wasn't just me that trapped there are a few characters that in the story that also got trap in this world. I don't know how many are trapped but ones I know like Danny and Duke as always have my back for being on the same team. Until is its destruction nearly two years ago and ones who are not dead when into hiding from our enemies the Reds.

I think that is enough for now on that subject and one more peace of information, once I have an editor and a proofreader helping me out I will release that story without those errors and other things that I miss during writing it.

So if you folks that read this and knows someone or you think you can help me with this story and later ones down the line later on. Just comment or sent me a message here or on my DeviantArt page: Link

That is all for this time. This is James Cribb signing out.