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I write the countless and troublesome story worlds that I see in my mind for you're enjoyment, mostly to just make them stop! GTFO out if my brain and onto the site! *SMACK*

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  • 116 weeks
    Quill's Reviews #1 : Annoyingitis

    Annoyingitis, By PixelMoon.
    A Story request By Multiversecruise

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    9 comments · 257 views
  • 122 weeks
    Commissions Open

    Commissions are open.

    Prices are here and on my page. $7-$10, clop I will do. Reply here or PM me details if you have a request.

    Pay via paypal.

    0 comments · 201 views
  • 221 weeks
    Unpublishing

    I'm really In over my head at the moment, I'm still gonna write but I feel I can only handle one story at a time and I have several unfinished published stories I still need to work on. I'm gonna unpublish the ones still not done and fix them one at a time. They aren't gonna die, they will be republished at a later date (hopefully more improved in terms of grammar) and with some extra chapter(s).

    0 comments · 289 views
  • 222 weeks
    Runaway Bride

    For all followers and/or general readers. Runaway Queen is getting a sequel and it will (hopefully) be out soon. For the curious I've posted an instagram link to a snapshot of what I've written. Please like and follow as well.

    https://instagram.com/p/-NHOOFvWra/

    1 comments · 214 views
Nov
25th
2017

Quill's Reviews #1 : Annoyingitis · 11:48pm Nov 25th, 2017

Annoyingitis, By PixelMoon.
A Story request By Multiversecruise

This is the first review of maybe many, we'll see. This is my first time reading one of PixelMoon's works, and I did laugh, some were funny, some were of pity, and Pinkie Pie jumped out of my PC several times to give me a noogie (and with a hoof it hurts like all hell) and to give me wet willies with her mane that somehow can be used as a hairy tentacle. That's right Freaks, Geeks, and Mic, it's a fourth wall breaking fic.

At first all seems normal...then Pinkie...Oh Pinkie, you crazy, crazy mare who can drive Marvel's Loki to insanity and fear by just being close to him and makes Doctor Strange fells his magic and All Seeing Eye of Aga,,,aug-something his eyeball amulet feel powerlessness against her pinkness. She breaks the forth wall by Breaking out the computer and writing for the author and as the title says, annoys the author. The jokes are of the Yo Mama variety, mostly, and if Brody Foxx made an appearance I would not have been surprised at that point.

All in all it's a random comedy and the ending is just as random. In terms of random comedy fanfics I have read in the past this one actually makes the most sense and that's saying something. But it's what it is, a random comedy using Pinkie Pie. As many do. It's well written, meaning I didn't see any errors, and some of the jokes earned a chuckle. All in all the title, and the description oddly enough, perfectly describe the experience you will have after reading this fic by PixelMoon.

And again I am sorry if this review is...lacking or not the best, it is my first and if I decide to do these more I might get better at them...


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....and if you want a review of your fic by me I will count that as a Commission, depending on how long the fic is depends on the price.

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Comments ( 9 )

Thanks so much for doing the review! I'll try my harder to get your commission done ASAP!

Wait.. You want people to PAY you to read their long fics? Um... Couldn't they get the same feedback from other people for free? In not trying to insult. I'm just really confused.

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It's the internet, confusion is a side effect.

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That still doesn't answer my question though...

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It answers everything...:rainbowderp:

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>_> um.... It doesn't? Why would people pay to get reviewed when they can easily get feedback from any other reader?

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...Okay, first off I don't think you got that I'm keeping to the stories Random theme...I'm just being random to keep with the story I reviewed theme...

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Um... Ok? Never mind then.

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I didn't pay. I did a trade with him. An art commission for a story review.

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