The Sirens Remorse New Edits · 6:55am Nov 24th, 2017
Dealing with a downed laptop which has microsoft word, until it is repaired I'm saving new chapters for my stories till later. In the meantime I am going back to the first installment of the series, The Sirens Remorse and not only fixing bad grammar and wording, but I am also bulking up character development and fixing plot holes I unintentionally left which were never answered. There were indeed many portions I left to detail explaination instead of characters doing the talking.
So if you want any additional lore and juicy information pertinent to the story's buildup I will have the edited chapters posted on this blog post. So far I have these chapters fixed and beefed up.
Ch.1 Yellow Tail
Ch.2 Delusions
Ch. 3 Catching A Break
Ch. 4 Raw Honey
Ch. 5 Canary in the Mine
Ch. 6 High Tide
Ch. 7 Studious As Can Be
As always I hope you enjoy.
