Edits and Sequel to Then Tomorrow Came · 8:22am Oct 18th, 2012
Went and polished up the first chapter. No drastic story changes so you won't miss anything if you don't want to go back and read it over again, just a quick polishing to bring it a bit closer to par with the later chapters. It was my first stab at writing, so it lagged a bit behind the others in quality. I had been meaning to do it forever, but somehow procrastinated for months.
In more exciting news, I do sorta kinda have a VERY rough idea for a sequel. No idea when such a thing would become a reality though. There are some major snarls I'd have to plan out (I have no idea how I would actually resolve it) and I'm extremely lazy on top being in school again and possibly landing an actual job soon. In the mean time however, the talented SerenityViewer has started an unofficial called Where the Gentle Wing Rests with my full blessing and support. He's been nearly obsessive with running everything by me for final approval to make sure the feel and characterization matches up with my vision from Tomorrow, and I've had a heavy hand in the editing process so every chapter has my seal of approval. If you like Tomorrow, you'll probably like this. My own sequel, if and when it ever gets written, is going to go in a very different direction, but I'm perfectly happy to accept Where the Gentle Wing Rests as an alternate scenario (I'm actually glad they're taking different routes because then I'd be worried mine would have some serious competition). So yeah, you guys should check it out and give feedback. Authors love feedback. Also feel free to demand I get off my lazy ass and writing with shouts of "MOAR!" When the guilt gets strong enough, it does occasionally motivate me to get stuff done.
mor.
ah MOAR... did i do good?
i did like your last one quite a bit, i really got into the story... at the end i was yelling at myself in a vain attempt to get twilight to stop.
I believe Krabs speaks for all of us. I'm taking this revision means you're going to be submitting it to EQD very soon? And thank you for the mention, you didn't have to do that
430698 Indeed. The Krab hath spoken!
Seriously though, Then Tomorrow Came is still one of my most favoritest fics on this site. I think you did a beautiful job handling the different characters, and everything going on with Twilight was just... whew. Definitely interested in a sequel, and I'll be shecking (not a typo) out that unofficial/official one you linked!
Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!
Please keep it twisted and dark!
Mor? Mor