ARGH

I shouldn't have released Chapter 2 last night. I just figured out that I really screwed up that whole exchange between Sunny Sea and Buck, and now I'm going to have to go elaborate and fix that in the next chapter. Lovely.

Ah well. I was trying to force something in that scene and I'm not really sure how it came out. I'll try to avoid stupidity like that in the future. Not to mention that the 'import from GDocs' feature cut out like four lines of the dialogue right in the middle, and I think I only now have finally fixed it properly.

And of course, reading it here instead of at Google docs, the bigger letters make the lines of dialogue without action words next to them seem... off. Gotta fix that for the future, too.

Sigh.