Rewrites

So i am gonna completely rewrite Unlikely Hero into something else, removing as many of the plot holes and such and slowing it down while hopefully allowing for more of the show's events to merge (This being season 4 and onwards)

Also gonna remove the big bad Darius and replace it with something else... something that i feel is more grey rather then a dark character. Also i have removed Helljumper and Echo as i am getting a lot of hateful pms and i am sick of it.

Comments

[Willdragoon]

But i love the helljumper series

[Rainbow skies]

If you feel like this is what you should do then I will support you to my full extent

[Hattrixn]

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it is

[Rainbow skies]

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Then you have my support, good luck with the rewrite

[JazzTheFox53rd]

Noooo! I loved helljumper and echo. I just have one question. Will they be back once you rewrite them? Also sry to hear that there are people actually sending you hateful pms because of those messages. It isn't right.

[Hattrixn]

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i don't know, if i do then the story of Echo will be gone and i will be starting sort of a fresh with Helljumper

[JazzTheFox53rd]

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Hmm. I seen that you started reworking on helljumper and that rewrite you did on the first chapter was a huge improvement. Also echo was a big improvement from helljumper. I believe you can rewrite it but at your own pace. Your a talented writer. Can't nopony tell you otherwise.

[Hattrixn]

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thanks and the main reason it improved was the fact that i have learnt alot in the time i have started

[Shadowblade019]

Bro you should not let the enemy way who cares of what that comment say just ignore them Toledo and keep doing what you're doing I really like the echo story

[Hattrixn]

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it is difficult when it is in my messages and there are many