New Story · 9:07am Oct 22nd, 2017
I say new, but it is a rewrite of an old. Anyone curious, you can check below the break (if you aren't curious... scamper off?).
As I've gotten more practice, and learned more (from a while ago) I grew as a writer. And things that would have "cut it" before just don't seem any good to me now. Things get cancelled because I either have no interest in them, or because I find them to be so awful that there is no redemption. During the last few days (weeks maybe) I worked on a rewrite to Marshmallow Madness. I finished it a few days ago. Now, all I have left is to edit it.
Once I'm done with that (sometime in the next few days) I'll work on getting it published. In the meantime I will also be working on a story I hope to finish soon, and another chapter of the only ongoing (not on hiatus) story currently up. Did I mention planning things for November? No. Well I will be doing that as well. Also, I'm looking for some cover art for the story, if anyone has any suggestions I would be appreciated (for Marshmallow Madness' rewrite).
Totally not stressed,
~Desh
If you'd like cover art, I could offer to make one for you. I won't guarantee it'll be a masterpiece but I am working to get better. You won't even need to pay, I'll do it for free! ;)
4705092
Aww~ Thanks! That sounds very nice~ ^^
4705506
Anytime! Just let me know if you want me to or not. :)
4705555
I'd love it if you would make one!
My idea is so needlessly complicated that ones I say it you'll facehoof... think you can make a marshmallow? I'm quite into puns, and other types of jokes. And using a bit of a joke image (relating to the name) would be rather hilarious... as well as draw people in... I hope...
If you want to do something else, that's fine. The original roughly has the same things, the new one has more details, better flow and pacing, and more characterization.
4705565
Just a marshmallow?
4705614
Slightly cooked marshmallow? Maybe on a stick... I'm not too sure if you can do what I'm thinking (as I'm bad at explaining this type of thing). So a slightly cooked marshmallow on a stick... background could be a starry night's sky... with a little smoke from the fire it is cooking over. Hopefully that helps... I'm sorry for me being bad at this...
4705618
So a slightly cooked marshmallow on a stick with a starry night sky background. Yeah I can do that! That'll be easy! I mean here's a picture of my disharmony story if you want to know what my skills are like. This isn't finished and I may not have the background for this.
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4705675
Wow, that's good!
4705685
Thanks! :)
When would you like the picture by?
4705691
Hopefully as soon as possible, as I hope to upload once I'm done editing (whenever that might be).
4705694
I'll try to get it done as soon as possible. Hopefully by the next two days.