On Black Holes

Sitting in an airport and writing on my phone. Got hit by a sudden bolt of inspiration. I'm now writing a sequel to Familiar. Words coming fast.

This is the darkest thing I have ever written.

By a lot.

Fuck.

Comments

[KMCA]

Excellent.

Let the angst flow through you!

[devas]

If it's good, it's good.

[Shrink Laureate]

If the story surprises even the writer and they have no choice but to hang on tight while it writes itself through them... that's a really good sign.

[Themaskedferret]

You do realize when you hit the bottom, you're not supposed to grab a shovel >.<

[Ether Echoes]

If this is the one I think it is, maybe that's a sign not to write it :\
Oh well.

[Reese]

Oh, my. Well... this should be interesting.

[metallusionsismagic]

Familiar 2: Deja Vu?

[BlazzingInferno]

So dark that light can’t escape it?

[The Hat Man]

I tried to write a chapter on my phone once. It messed up the word suggestions for a while afterwards. Every word beginning with M would automatically suggest “Maud.”

Good luck with the sequel! Tentative title = ”Familiar 2: Rainbow the Robot Rapist” or “A Little Too Familiar.”

[GaPJaxie]

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Title: "The Young Master"

It's the story of how Rainbow Dash ended up that screwed up in the first place.

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It grabbed me. Credit to a friend for giving me the idea, but once it had me, I realized I had to write it. This is the story.

[Ankaru]

Is it the story of how her life got twisted upside down?

[Tanis]

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It's the story of how Rainbow Dash ended up that screwed up in the first place.

"Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing"

[equestrian.sen]

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You're... supposed to grab the jackhammer?

[Rao the Red Sun]

I ache with anticipation.

[Corejo]

This is the darkest thing I have ever written.

Good. Let's see what you're made of.

[Cold in Gardez]

You're going to make me eat my words, aren't you?

[GaPJaxie]

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We're past that point now, man.

This story yerns to exist.

[Unknownlight]

4687417 So it's a prequel, not a sequel?

[GaPJaxie]

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Not according to fimfiction rules! But yes.

[Trick Question]

My Trick Question darksense is tingling.

[TheAccidentalBrony]

Good. Gooooooood.

[ForSpite]

Given some of your stuff, I'll assume that's quite dark.