First Four Chapters have been improved by a minimum of 20%! · 6:19am Sep 26th, 2017
Found a free program that can help me fix some mistakes. Chapters have been edited to make for a better read. Overall the story shouldn't feel like anything has changed. Some details have been added to describe movements, and other small actions, albeit with fewer EXCLAMATION! POINTS! So nothing really major.
I'm going to collapse the New Friends chapter down into one. Just because I'm tired of looking at all those 'part numbers'. I want my chapter names to invoke a feeling in my readers just by them alone, if you've already read said chapters. And the numbers kind of ruin that. Plus I think it just looks better.
As for updates on the next chapter of Jewel of the Everfree.
I have 6k words down, quite a bit of outlining left to fill, and a lot of dialog. It's going to be quite the sine wave chapter, as well as some new, original (I hope) ideas for what I have in store for Rarity specifically, and the world of mlp.
It'll probably be a few days after the premier of the MLP Movie by the time I post it. If I had to guess.
Why the delay? I need some help with a bit of research, and I know a few people that might be able to help me with what I want to do in the next Chapter. So half the time is just going to be getting in touch with those people.
