Sep
26th
2017
Chapter 16 of "The Expansive Romance of Applebloom and Coral Leaf" is now up! · 4:20am Sep 26th, 2017
Well, kind of flew through this chapter, but hope it has some nice, emotional moments to it.
I did struggle with it for a bit, because I felt it could have become very 'talky.' Because of that (and fearing it'd easily go over 10,000 words), I decided to 'streamline' the chapter, with summaries, and giving characters dialogue, when I felt it was necessary.
It feels a lot more 'show' than 'tell,' when it comes to various parts. Plus, I did enjoy talking a bit about Rarity's struggles, as she seems to have become the main designer for the upcoming wedding.
Still, it may not be perfect, but I think it gets the job done!
