Polyamory · 3:59pm Sep 16th, 2017
So here's the issue. The next chapter should be a wedding chapter, where Bug Butt, Love Butt, Moon Butt, Sun Butt, and the luckiest stallion alive get married. I was planning on having two sections, one where Twilight tries to organize it in a sane manner, and one where Chrysalis wrecks everything in the kinkiest way possible. The problem is, I haven't actually decided what sort of changeling shenanigans she's going to get up to in it, and I want it to be good.
I am pretty settled on what I am going to do the chapter after that though, so I'm thinking about possibly skipping the marriage and writing the next chapter while I think about it, then plug the marriage chapter in when I get it done. Would that be agreeable? Alternately, you could give me ideas about how bug-horse, possibly with the aid of love-horse, will make things naughty.
Also I'm starting to consider if maybe I should do some Fluffle x Chryssie one-shots unrelated to this. Either pony world, human world, or both, just cause it's a cute couple. Also Marksaline is impossibly evil-hot.
The obvious answer is that Chryssie "kidnaps" the other brides and has them replaced with Changelings and makes Shining go through some sort of kinky sex maze to find his brides. But not just Celly and Luna, let's have her kidnap Cadence too.
And heck, it'll take me a while to edit. You'll probably be able to think of more ideas while I do that.
As for the Fluffle Puff series, please do! I'm looking forward to reading that.
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That's a good idea, but not really something that could be done during the wedding itself. The brides might actually be upset if they are made to miss their own wedding. That's more something Chrysalis would do either prior to the wedding, or just after it on the wedding night.
Doing it before the wedding might be interesting, especially if Chrysalis insists that Twilight accompany Shining through the maze. It'd give opportunity for Twilight to see her brother doing lots of lewd things, and might give more build-up to her finally giving in and riding his dick herself later. Also it might be funny because Twilight would be taking the maze dead serious, like she believed the fate of Equestria depended on it, while Shining would be having a blast.
For that matter, maybe Chrysalis would make it a 'family bonding experience' by insisting that his parents accompany him too. It'd be even more super-awkward for Twilight once her parents got into the spirit of things too. Might could use it as an excuse for Shining to bang his mom, since it was going to be sorta an extra thing later. If that happened, Night Light would probably come onto Twilight while they watched, which could be even more super-awkward and/or fun depending on how it goes.
That's a lot to think about, though I'd still have to come up with what would happen in the fun maze!
Chrysalis still has all those changelings, right? Can you say charity
fundraisingloveraising orgy?Well, or maybe not. I guess whatever Chrysalis perverts somehow has to fit into Twilight's plan of a grand public wedding, at least on the surface.
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It's pretty heavily implied in the animations that Chryssie and Fluffle are indeed getting it on, and the comic kinda sorta hints that 'big sis' Marksaline might occasionally get in on it too. Maybe I could follow the 'story line' that they already have and fill in the blanks.
May even be able to make use of poor Dan as a side story to it.
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I figure that Chrysalis and any of her 'children' that she invited would be required to stay in their true form, not that they would necessarily abide by that requirement. I see Chrysalis as one to constantly break the rules, yet never get in trouble over it because it always ends up being fun. You can get away with just about anything in Equestria so long as you claim to have learned a lesson from it, or if it's really severe, sing a song about it.
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day of the wedding and a hundred love-horses show up?
sort of a love version of "too many pinkie pies" except with changlings instead of a mirror pool? (and the real love-horse is in on the fun, maybe?)
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Oh gods. I can see it now, them all chanting "Love! Love!" and encouraging random ponies to do lewd things to one another.
I have an idea of what I'm doing now, but I think that idea might be fit for its own one-shot fic using the actual mirror pool.
i could certainly believe your cadence would try to get twilight in on the shenanigans for the wedding night, a wedding gift to herself and shining no doubt!