Throwback Thursday #2 · 8:42am Sep 14th, 2017
[Sex] [Comedy] [Human] [Romance]
Prince Geo has been dispatched to the Gryphon lands on royal business while his wife, Princess Twilight Sparkle, has been left behind in Canterlot. Also going with the Prince are Spike, who will be the couple's primary source of communication and Geo's friend John, who is only going along for a change of scenery.
While Geo is attending to his duty, a letter from Twilight arrives — which explains in clear detail what she is going to expect from her husband when he gets home. Spike and John, seizing the chance to have some fun, decide to write a letter back to the desperate mare... which results in all three males getting a surprise.
Hoo, boy. How many of you remember this little gem?
What started out as an idea sent to me by a follower quickly became my worst-rated story on Fimfiction, with many people saying they didn't like it because of what was being implied.
I added a second chapter to it, in an attempt to dissuade these fears, but to no avail; the story still sits at a 62% approval rating.
Furthermore, I'm not entirely happy with how it turned out; the ending of the first chapter seems lazy, and I think I could have done a better job on the second. But I won't edit it; I want to keep the story as it is, so I can be reminded of the epic fail which caused me to seriously think about how I planned out my future work.
But anyway, what do you all think?
Sound off in the comments, and stay awesome.
