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  • 12 weeks
    I got ART!

    I know I haven't done a blog in awhile, but being a full-time single parent working a full-time job, and a part-time writer tends to really chew into the hours I have in a week. That said, I just had to carve out a little time to show off the remarkable gift I was given from Lady Lightning Strike by way of the amazingly talented artist Pridark.

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  • 25 weeks
    Commissions!

    Yeah, been awhile since I've written any sort of blog post, but I do have some good news. I'm re-opening to commissions! My patrons on Patreon will get priority for their commissions first, but it doesn't mean that everyone else can't ask for some stories either. Here are my commission conditions:

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  • 33 weeks
    So... a small heads up about the upcoming month...

    I'm about to start writing the final chapter or two of the Brightly Lit saga, after which time I'm actually going to be going on vacation for a week. As in actual time off from my job and all other responsibilities. Which means no Twilight Learned this month, and perhaps not next month either as I reassess things in the wake of the end of writing roughly 350,000 words on one pair of stories set

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  • 53 weeks
    So... a bit of a heads up

    Over the past few years I've engaged in a practice of letting my patrons on Patreon decide what story I should update following the Brightly Lit update in the month, and I've noticed a bit of a pattern. Mainly that anytime "How Twilight Learned" comes up in the voting it easily wins. So recently I asked my patrons if they would like me to just concentrate on Brightly Lit and HTL until one of

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  • 78 weeks
    State of the Pen

    It's been 10 days since my brother died and 6 since we laid him to rest at the foot of a willow tree near a shady stream. I find myself both functional and numb. I can act, react, and do things, but anything beyond the basics is like trying to push fog with your hands. Something happens but not much. I find myself staring at a computer screen and feeling... nothing.

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Aug
30th
2017

What is a Fullmetal Pony? · 8:36am Aug 30th, 2017

When Twilight is the BEST approached me about writing a bit of a review of their story Fullmetal Pony I was pretty hesitant. While my knowledge of pop culture is broad, wide and deep, anime is one of the areas I haven’t been able able to spend much time in. While I’d like to see more, I simply don’t have the time to separate the good stuff from the drawn-by-horny-college-guy crap.

While I have heard of Fullmetal Alchemist I have not seen more than five minutes of it and with so little knowledge of the background material I was hesitant to say “yes.” But I did, warning TISB about my deficiencies and telling them that I would give it a fair shot. So, bear in mind that the following comes from someone who knows diddly-squat about Fullmetal Alchemist.

In short, I enjoyed the story, a lot. The world is detailed, the character full of motivation and incentive. The writing is technically very good, getting all those fiddly punctuation and grammar rules down just right. The writers really made me feel that I was sitting by Shining Armor while on a train trip, or with Rainbow Dash, chasing down discordants, or backing away from a knowledge obsessed Twilight Sparkle.

Now, for the bad parts. This story isn’t a My Little Pony story and the characters are not the characters we know and love from the show. They are pony characters who, for the most part have a few similarities to the characters we know, but that’s all. Now, this is not a bad thing of itself, but if you go in expecting to see “our” MLP characters in a Fullmetal world, you are going to be disappointed.

But that is all that I could find to criticize about this story. Overall, I consider it a fine addition to my list of tracked stories and I think a lot of folks would find it enjoyable as well. Probably the best praise I can give this story is that it has made me want to track down Fullmetal Alchemist and watch it.

TFullmetal Pony
To get back what they've lost, siblings Twilight Sparkle and Shining Armor embark on a quest to obtain the legendary Alicorn Amulet.
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