Edits Made to "Degree of Trust" chapter in "Grief" · 12:54am Aug 15th, 2017
Since a new chapter for "Grief is the Price We Pay" isn't getting uploaded today like normal, I've decided to go ahead and upload a new and edited version of the latest chapter, "Degree of Trust," which I've done in working to improve a few prose-quality related issues it bore, most especially in the first parts of the chapter, adding an additional 1,089 words in the process. These problems are probably not entirely fixed as I still have to keep in mind the flow and tone of the chapter on a whole, but hopefully it is still a marked improvement.
I urge readers to take the time to at least peruse the chapter a second time so they are all up to date on these changes. I will be sure to remind readers again of this when I post the next chapter this Friday.
Otherwise, everything is still going as previously planned. 
Duly noted, evil man.
What the-why?! I thought it was a great chapter!
Welp, guess I'll reread this already awesome chapter...
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The edits are relatively minor; the gist of the chapter is still the same as before, it's just some of the more minor details have been altered in various ways, for the most part expanded upon, or refined to be more clearly conveyed.
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I read it and the edits were good. It was a nice expansion, though I will admit I liked the chapter before it. The chapter's still great.