The Dark Knight Update: Work On Chapter 2 Begins! Also, HELP WANTED. · 11:44pm Aug 11th, 2017
Greetings Gotham, Joker here! Well, I've started putting Chapter 2 of The Dark Knight together. I have a pretty good idea of what I'm going to do for most of it. Kylo explains why he's there, and although the Princesses and Elements of Harmony are a little confused by the whole Sith Lord and someone screwing with time thing, they have no choice but to believe him after what went down between him and the Changeling Queen. Anyways, after they find out where Starlight Glimmer is, which of course is Our Town, the Mane 6, Spike, and Kylo take the train to the city nearest to it, where they make a pit stop for lunch. Thankfully, there are other humans in this version of Equestria, so Kylo isn't forced onto a vegan diet. Unfortunately, they happen to pick the same restaurant where a certain Prick Blueblood happens to be having lunch with a few of his hoity-toity friends. Blueblood starts to insult Kylo. I could use some help with the exact wording. Feel free to PM me with suggestions for what is said exactly. But, one way or the other... this happens.
Of course, all Hell/Tartarus breaks loose shortly afterwards. The Mane 6, of course, are scared out of their wits (Fluttershy is borderline comatose) and, at least temproraliy, the Elements start treating Kylo like a ticking time bomb. Anyways, the group arrives at Our Town and...
Skipping ahead a little, Kylo does Force Mind Probe on Starlight before he convinces her to become his apprentice (not sure what for that) and given how the Mane 6 see Kylo as a ticking time bomb at this point, no one's arguing about this. Also, King Sombra returns with the Crystal Empire, but is promptly stabbed in the back by a Sith Lord, who takes over the Crystal Empire with help from the platoon of blaster totting soldiers he's got with him.
Further more, I've been thinking, and I've decided to take on a co-author for this endeavor. Seeing as doing an open call has worked for me before, that's what I'm doing now. So, shoot me a PM if you're interested!
The insults should likely hit both family and a monky bou comment would likely work too
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There's other humans in this version of Equestria too, so monkey insults won't work.
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Being called a monky is always insulting and just because they are livein in relative peace does not mean some racism exists on both sides
I could help, but I'm fresh out of ideas and I generally suck at this sort of stuff.
For the insult Dick Blueblood says, it could be that he's a dark freak that needs to be watched and insults his looks. He also could think Kylo Ren's a pet or some freaky creature who insults his lightsaber thinking it's a toy.
He also could accuse Kylo Ren of being a killer or doing behavior that reminds of why he joined the First Order by thinking he's a commoner or low-life.
When Starlight tries to take the cutie marks of the Mane 6, Kylo Ren stops it as it notices that so-called Shameless Staff isn't strong with the Force or Magic and puts a stop to Starlight thus leading into the interrogation.