Story: Dawn - Second reading of Chapters 1 & 2 · 10:23pm Jul 13th, 2017
Hello to everybody who reads this message!
I just wanted to inform you all (Most importantly all the people who were so friendly to point out that my grammar sucked hard in some parts of the chapters. And no, I'm sincerely greatful for the feedbacks I received. ) that I rewrote a tiny little bit the two first chapters of "Dawn" so that some found grammar issues (Which were sometimes really stupid, I have to admit ) are taken care of and that especially the Canterlot High part of chapter one is more as a simple exposition wall.
Secondly, my proofreader, Chrome Masquerade, will hopefully (but I trust him without fail in this regard) find the remaining errors when he read over them.
Thank you all for the support! I could hardly believe how many people are reading this story.
No, seriously. You are all insane.
I came online and had at one point 95 notifications at its highest at once and if I count everything together until now I had over the entire day like 290 notifications.
I hope I can finally start with chapter 3 today. It's 0:50 A.M. in my time, so yeah, soon.
Best greetings,
Anachronon
You sound nice! I like the story too. Thank you!
4600756
No problem and thank ya kindly.
Can't wait.
Sounds good. Will be looking forward to it.