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SpiritDutch


Not really paying attention to any of this anymore, but I keep the tab open... for some reason.

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  • 324 weeks
    Not going to rewrite any more than I've done. That's it, no need to read further.

    It pains me, perhaps more than I can articulate, to have a flawed work out there. It reflects badly on me, and the ideas and themes I want to convey. I want to change everything I've written to be at a certain level of quality that I expect from myself. For the past months I've been going through and doing that, the last being at CH 33.

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  • 349 weeks
    Returned from Cuba

    Just returned from a month in Cuba. Hard to get internet there (google it and be disgusted) so I didn't get to write much. I have a lot to catch up on. I hope to put some kind of thing soon-ish. I get a clenching kind of fear of disappointing when I don't make regular progress.

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  • 354 weeks
    When the Everfree Burns, Act One revision is complete.

    Act One of When the Everfree Burns has been fully rewritten. About another 50,000 words, major theming, character motivation, and dialogue changes. Minor changes to the overall course of the plot. Some chapters, like the Bridge chapters, have been rearranged. I'll make a comprehensive list of changes later. Check back later for that if you care. Right now I'm just upset with my perseverance to

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  • 385 weeks
    Procrastinating makes me productive.

    I seems to have a crippling compulsion not to get work done. In fact, I am just so repulsed by the things I should be doing right now that I make tasks for myself to avoid it. So, I'm going to look through all the blogs I've made and fix a few of the broken image links and things in them.Actually, I'm not going to do that stuff right now. I'm just going to distract myself for a few seconds by

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  • 452 weeks
    I Like Maps: Second Impact

    Heyoo! I have come once again to give you a map. From the last one, we shift East and slightly South, to new horizons in cartographic adventure.

    The Riverpony Lands

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Jul
7th
2017

When the Everfree Burns, Act One revision is complete. · 6:43am Jul 7th, 2017

Act One of When the Everfree Burns has been fully rewritten. About another 50,000 words, major theming, character motivation, and dialogue changes. Minor changes to the overall course of the plot. Some chapters, like the Bridge chapters, have been rearranged. I'll make a comprehensive list of changes later. Check back later for that if you care. Right now I'm just upset with my perseverance to take it this far and happy its over.

Bridge chapters next. Act Two sometime. Next new chapter will either be stuck into gaps in Act One, or a Bridge Chapter. Maybe Act Three. IDK.

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Comments ( 1 )

Hey great. I had forgot I was waiting to finishing reading up on your story till you had finished this. Nice to hear you've got it all done

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