When the Everfree Burns, Act One revision is complete. · 6:43am Jul 7th, 2017
Act One of When the Everfree Burns has been fully rewritten. About another 50,000 words, major theming, character motivation, and dialogue changes. Minor changes to the overall course of the plot. Some chapters, like the Bridge chapters, have been rearranged. I'll make a comprehensive list of changes later. Check back later for that if you care. Right now I'm just upset with my perseverance to take it this far and happy its over.
Bridge chapters next. Act Two sometime. Next new chapter will either be stuck into gaps in Act One, or a Bridge Chapter. Maybe Act Three. IDK.
Hey great. I had forgot I was waiting to finishing reading up on your story till you had finished this. Nice to hear you've got it all done