Desh Reviews 7 · 1:04am Jun 21st, 2017

[]

Name: Octy’s Eggs
Author: Cinder Vel
Rating: Teen
Genre: Comedy
Chapter Count: One
Review: The story lives up to the comedy part, and to add with it a nice little side story; which on its own could be… well, its own. The characters, while good, were slightly forced on the side of the accents (Octavia). Not to say it was bad, no, just that it went a little too far. The concept behind the thing was well… amusing, and I can only say one thing to it: I am wanting to see more.
Recommendation: 4/5 I say give it a read, you might like it. If you are like me, and want to see more, just pester the author until they get fed up and work on a sequel. (Note for Cinder: :P)

Name: A Bridge Betwixt Lovers
Author: Sky Blue CMC
Rating: Mature
Genre: Clop
Chapter Count: One
Review: The finally in the trilogy, this series started with cards, and it ends with cards. I’d say it is a rather fitting end. The sex wasn’t all that great, it lacked any of the “sexy” but the main-- and most important --thing it lacked was the part that it wasn’t really erotic. And ponies playing a certain card game… left some rather unsettling images in my head.
Recommendation: 2/5 Give it a read, you might be pleasantly surprised at the results.

Name: A Stormy Night
Author: Saberking2012
Rating: Everyone
Genre: Slice of Life
Chapter Count: Three
Review: This was one of the stories that has a natural feel to it. Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash ~~become a better ship~~ snuggle during a thunderstorm. Rainbow Dash naturally gets put on the short end of the stick. If I were in that situation I know I would much rather help instead of being comforted; and no, I would also be just as likely to be on the scared end, as I am on the comforting end… er, anyway. This was a great little thing filled with something I’m sure many children would end up doing, which is in essence a more positive experience.
Recommendation: 3/5 A quick read, but still a good read.

Thanks for reading. Vote for the next Fics in the comments, or by dropping me a PM.
Here is the Master List, which doubles as the rules.

Report DeshLune · 337 views · #Desh Reviews

Comments ( 4 )