The Kylo Ren Video I made, and the Star Wars story idea I had

Well, I decided to swallow my pride and hope for the best in terms of that Kylo Ren video. Well, here you go:

I chose Indestructible for the song, because there's so many Darth Vader tributes set to that song. And seeing as Ben/Kylo is supposed to be Vader 2.0, I figured why not use it for him?

Now, about that Star Wars story of mine... the title I'm working with at this time is "Out of Time." Basically, Kylo Ren, in his own TIE Fighter Advanced (which is basically the baby of a TIE Fighter and a decent star fighter, in that it has a wider array of weapons, deflector sheilds, life support, etc) has an accident with a black hole that spits him out only two or three years after the Galactic Empire is formed and Anakin Skywalker gets encased in the Darth Vader armor. As a result, we're looking at a whole new ballgame, with Kylo Ren, who isn't even supposed to exist at this point serving as Palpatine's left hand-man (Vader's already the Emperor's right-hand man), Vader learns his kids are still alive MUCH sooner than he was supposed to (he can't really kidnap them or anything do to the risk of losing his grandson, but he does have them spied on. The most difficult child for him to watch is Leia, because she's so much like Padme) and gets to be the parent he'd never thought he'd be to Kylo/Ben. Oh, and here's the important one: THEY KNOW THE EMPIRE IS SUPPOSED TO LOSE THE GALACTIC CIVIL WAR. Knowing they're supposed to lose gives the Empire the advantage, as I don't think the Emperor is the kinda guy who'd make the same mistake twice (although, Kylo does keep the whole "Vader throws you down a shaft to the main reactor" thing to himself).

Now, I've got plenty of other things planned, but I'm curious about what you guys think of my idea, and if you have any suggestions or ideas for it. Rest assured, Kylo will ask Vader this question:

"What was Grandmother like?"