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David Silver


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  • 3 weeks
    A Story Elsewhere

    https://www.amazon.com/kindle-vella/story/B0CWRBD54T
    So, do you like LitRPGs? Here's one set in the modern day as a catboy (there are reasons for that) discovers a whole new world of trouble, and a job.

    Written by me, for anyone to enjoy if they click above.

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  • 3 weeks
    March Schedule

    We have some stories shuffling about, and a new one hitting the ground at a gallop! Have an idea you want to see come to life? Claim a new tier to make it happen! Your support fuels my creativity and allows me to keep writing for our community. Support here and let's create some great stories together!

    Here's what's updating and how often:

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  • 5 weeks
    Overflow tier


    I made a new tier for folks who want the author foal tier but it's full. It gets you an update per month on the story of your choice(existing or new). 2,000'sh words!

    https://www.patreon.com/davidsilver

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  • 5 weeks
    Write With

    Not sure if folks know this is an option, but writing alongside me is also an option for my writing, if you want to work on a story at my side instead of just handing it off to me and having me do the words alone. Better if you want to keep a hand on the wheel directly, and it gives you immediate viewing of the work as we'd both be on the same document, plugging away at the story.

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    13 comments · 161 views
  • 8 weeks
    Febuary Schedule

    We're starting a new story. One story ended, so a sequel is coming as the patron demands and I'll gladly provide. This one will be far less reader driven though(the last being a one course CYOA). Have an idea you want to see come to life? Claim a new tier to make it happen! Your support fuels my creativity and allows me to keep writing for our community.

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May
26th
2017

Tiny Titan Picture, Draft 1 · 8:47pm May 26th, 2017

I'm a bit curious, is this one better or worse than the other: Click here!

Comments ( 13 )

That looks cool! The other one hid her form too much and this one it is easier to see her outline.

This one is much better.

This picture avoids several of the pitfalls that made the other one seem a bit awkward. In this one, her mane and tail - along with the areas around her eyes and muzzle - aren't covered by her costume. That makes it seem more like something that's being worn, since a form-fitting costume that covers everything the way her previous picture did should deform how her mane clings to her head, and wouldn't leave the line of her mouth completely visible the way it did either.

This one makes it look like she's wearing an actual costume, rather than like she fell into an ink vat which has since dried on her. Though the fact that she's raising her right fore-hoof while twisting her head so far to the left is a bit awkward, I think.

She also seems a bit younger here; shorter and less leggy, which is good.

Who exactly is this character?

4548313 Why is she called Tiny Titan?

4548345 Why is Peter Parker called Spiderman?

4548398 Got it. Which of David's fanfics is this from?

I like this one better. This one sure looks more like a mare in a suit than the previous one.

I can tell where the suit ends and the pony begins this time, which is nice. However, it's still not a yellow jumpsuit with a white cape. 2/10.
:derpytongue2:

Agreed with other posters saying the suit fits better here. To me, it calls back to the comic characters I grew up with, where enough similarities are evident to tell the reader that these two are the same character.

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