Tiny Titan Picture, Draft 1 · 8:47pm May 26th, 2017
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That looks cool! The other one hid her form too much and this one it is easier to see her outline.
This one is much better.
This picture avoids several of the pitfalls that made the other one seem a bit awkward. In this one, her mane and tail - along with the areas around her eyes and muzzle - aren't covered by her costume. That makes it seem more like something that's being worn, since a form-fitting costume that covers everything the way her previous picture did should deform how her mane clings to her head, and wouldn't leave the line of her mouth completely visible the way it did either.
This one makes it look like she's wearing an actual costume, rather than like she fell into an ink vat which has since dried on her. Though the fact that she's raising her right fore-hoof while twisting her head so far to the left is a bit awkward, I think.
She also seems a bit younger here; shorter and less leggy, which is good.
Who exactly is this character?
4548295 Prickle Berry
4548313 Why is she called Tiny Titan?
4548345 Why is Peter Parker called Spiderman?
4548398 Got it. Which of David's fanfics is this from?
4548447 Prickle Berry Tries to Be Careful
4548558 Ok, got it.
I like this one better. This one sure looks more like a mare in a suit than the previous one.
I can tell where the suit ends and the pony begins this time, which is nice. However, it's still not a yellow jumpsuit with a white cape. 2/10.
Agreed with other posters saying the suit fits better here. To me, it calls back to the comic characters I grew up with, where enough similarities are evident to tell the reader that these two are the same character.
Nifty!