Offline and Question + THANK YOU ALL! · 3:01am May 8th, 2017
Okay, tomorrow, I'll be returning back to Canada. And there is something I got to say before I go to sleep for the night.
First of all, to everyone who gave thumbs up on my first EGID story, I want to thank you all for your support and encouragement to continue the franchise. You've made this story popular... even though when I look at it, it probably wouldn't be. So I want to thank you all for the support and encouragement.
And now onto another question. After some thinking, I think its time for a makeover on it. It needs to be repaired and given some more descriptive details, take down the pictures, and eliminate the cringiness. Would you all, wish to see that made? Do you all want me to give the first EGID a makeover?
Be sure to leave your thoughts.
Yes I think you stories should be remade because you have one too many pictures in them. The picture should only be used as cover art we already know what each transformer looks like. And if we don't with the name listed in the story as a character it wouldn't be that hard to look them up and see what they look like. I know that this might sound a bit harsh but I am saying this only to help you as a writer and as a author of something that has been a very good story line so far. I feel that if you take the time to clean up the stories then you might make them go from 'good' to 'master piece' but please keep in mind that is only my own opinion. I love your work and I am very much eagerly awaiting to see what else you are able to come up with. Each story that you have done has been good and has left me wanting to see more which is why I read them when ever I get the chance to do so. But like I said if you spend the time to clean them up a bit you might get even better results than what you have gotten so far.
There's always room for improvement.
Also, just out of curiosity, how was your experience in the states?
I'm up for a remaster edition.
How was the USA for you?