What I've come to realize (Lost in The Dark) · 1:24am Oct 4th, 2012
(Chapter 15 of Lost in The Dark is done!)
Well... I've been trying to revise alot of the material in Lost in The Dark, but had only gone as far as the prologue when I realized a very sad fact. There are key mistakes that, if I fix, I'd have to rewrite a large portion of the story. The more I try to find a way to fix it, I always end up with the same answer: Make a revised version.
I thought about cancelling the first Lost in The Dark, but ZuperDerpy talked me into finishing it, and I will. Rather not have you guys read a story that was just going to be cancelled and I'm not expecting you to have the patience for me to finish another version of the same story.
Just to get one thing clear, the revised version will be very different from the original. It will have longer chapter, and will explain alot more of the back story than I had in the first version, but one of the biggest changes will be that it will take place in a humanized pony world, since I've learned I'm not good at describing scenes using ponies. (I'd actually be happy to hear opinions or ideas on this change)
I'm happy with all the feedback I got with my first story and appreciate it, and I'm sorry I've not been the most responsible author.
Such a remix will require...
AWESOME!
And you, sir, have plenty of that. Keep calm and spin on.
401042 You, sir, haven't accepted my Skype request
401048 Now I have. Oh, and by the way, will you continuewith the ministory?
401058 I ameth, but I need to finish the last chapter... eth. I need to make it very Doctor Whooves style.
401072 Cant wait.