Chapters 8 and 9 are out!

So yeah, I couldn't wait any longer. I finished chapter 9 this morning and was so excited I had to post it. Grammarly has been really useful ironing out the kinks and I encourage fellow budding writers to give it a crack. It won't compare having a real human but it certainly does help get rid of painful, stupid, elementary mistakes.

The great thing is that as an App, it even works here on this website, however, it doesn't work for google docs ... yet. Hoping I don't get banned for advertising but seriously it is really good and you can opt for the free or premium version. I just happen to be a lucky pony whose wife has the premium version through her studies!

Anyway, I'm going to be taking a break for a week as I try to consolidate the story. I was reviewing my story plan and the later chapters I had planned (15 +) felt long winded and I think I should be able to reduce it and made more concise.

Whilst your waiting, may I suggest having a read of this storyRebuilding a Crusade

I've read upto 4 chapters thus far and it is a really interesting read and concept. I won't spoil it for you but it is interesting.

So I hope you all enjoyed chapters 8 and 9. Chapter 10 will feature a character that I am really looking forward to bringing into this story. I'm just hoping he doesn't leave too much of a mess!