• Member Since 16th Feb, 2017
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Jet Storm


Writer, pre-reader and a dad to two colts and a filly.

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  • 314 weeks
    Some art.

    Hi everypony

    I've been doing some chalk art recently with the kids and thought I show off some of my work. Each drawing gets progressively better.

    My first drawing - Rainbow Dash

    My second drawing - Fluttershy

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  • 319 weeks
    Wish us luck!

    Hey fellow readers,

    I know I haven't been that prolific of an author as of late. I've been working on a couple of things in the background, and I am hoping to make some updates to my other two stories very soon. Whilst you wait, I have some good news.

    My good friend, LavendarRegards and I have written a brand new story for the Everfree Northwest Scribblefest 2018 contest.

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  • 342 weeks
    Chapters 13 and 14 released ... phew so much to do

    Hi fellow readers,

    It looks like the prereading and helping others has worked wonders for my own muse! So far I've helped about 4 to 5 people with their stories. I still have a few stories to read and when I can I will be trying to help them.

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  • 344 weeks
    I live!

    Hi guys

    To those who read my stories, and my blogs I just want to say that I am sorry for not have been suffering from writer's block these past couple of months, which is seeming to delay my progress.

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  • 358 weeks
    Quick update

    Hi guys,

    Just quickly, I've uploaded the edited chapters of Somepony to Love, which are appropriately titled "(properly edited)". Credit for the edit goes to Shadowghostalex.

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Apr
20th
2017

Grammarly is awesome · 3:29pm Apr 20th, 2017

I was talking to my wife about her assignment and she introduces me to Grammarly. She gets the premium version free with her studies.

After using it for an hour, I must say this.

IT. IS. AWESOME!

Pros

It squashed a LOT of annoying little mishaps - grammar and spelling errors.
Probably won't compare to a real editor but it does the job for now whilst I find someone.

Cons

I mean, it's not perfect. Told me I used "I" and "Pony" too many times in on chapter and suggested I use something else and horse. Oh well, it squashed a LOT of annoying little mishaps - grammar and spelling errors.
For Americans, it is perfect for their spelling. For Brits, Aussie and assumingly Kiwi's not so much. It wasn't winning me any favOURS on that account.
Also doesn't like archaic language such as whilst, amongst and thereafter, which I am particularly fond of.
Doesn't like Applejack or Applebloom - Ah mean what's not tah love?

Summary

So I edited chapters 1 - 7 using it. Still wanting to find a real editor though, lol. I hope it's a better read now!

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